What message does The Herald carry?

                                           

She tried for what seemed like the hundredth time to find a comfortable spot on the small hard cot. She stopped for a moment to listen for her husbands soft quiet breaths. Satisfied with the sounds she tried to drift off to sleep but she was unsuccessful.

Her mind would not be quiet. Frantic thoughts raced from past to present and sometimes to what lay ahead. She wasn’t sure how much more she could handle.

She was only 25 years old and would soon be a widow. Her husband was dying from a cancerous mass in his pancreas. It had only been three weeks ago since he was diagnosed as terminal.

She would never forget the look on the surgeons face when he told her the cancer had spread to his other organs and there was nothing more, he could do.

Why had this happened to them she asked herself again, why? Tomorrow would be their six month wedding anniversary. They should be working on their careers, buying a house and thinking about when to have babies. Instead they spent their time together in the hospice ward waiting for death.

She had just closed her eyes when the door opened wide. Harsh light from the hallway flooded the room. She shielded her eyes from the brilliance.

A tall thin man dressed in black entered, his face as ghostly white as a street corner mime. He surveyed the room as panic gripped her. He walked to the sick bed and laid his hands upon her husbands chest. In a low soft voice he spoke one sentence and left the room.

She swallowed her terror and jumped from the cot to give chase. She caught sight of his dark back as he quickly entered the elevator. Running to the nurses station she told them of the man in black coming into her husband’s room. One of the night shift nurses had also seen this strange man and security had been alerted.

When she returned to her husbands side she found he had peacefully passed away in his sleep. She cried over her loss and with relief that his suffering was over ,then she remembered the words of the tall dark man.

“ I’m so sorry”.

Security never found the man in black.

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  • Melody SJAL on Feb 28, 2010

    Wow, that’s excellent!

  • PR Mace on Feb 28, 2010

    This is a work of fiction taken from a true story another nurse once told me. It gives me chills. Thank you for all your support.

    Pam

  • Goodselfme on Feb 28, 2010

    I have actually had people tell me of a visitation of death, which you describe well here. I was riveted by your story.

  • amandeep13 on Feb 28, 2010

    Awesome

    Brilliant write

  • martie on Feb 28, 2010

    A wonderful story. I am trying to decide if “death” was sorry for taking him or for not easing his pain sooner.

  • ken bultman on Feb 28, 2010

    You have retold the anecdote perfectly. Well done.

  • giftarist on Feb 28, 2010

    I like this one. Great share!

  • Jenny Heart on Feb 28, 2010

    Really had me in the stories mood. Great one!

  • nobert soloria bermosa on Feb 28, 2010

    wonderful piece…

  • Michael Eboh on Feb 28, 2010

    Nice post indeed. Tnx 4 sharing.

  • Alicia Wind on Feb 28, 2010

    Oh my goodness…that was sad. Did u wrote it? Moving and very emotional. The tall man was a messenger of death….

    Really like it.

  • AlmaG on Feb 28, 2010

    Great story though it was sad.

  • PR Mace on Feb 28, 2010

    I was asked in a comment if I wrote this. Yes, I did write it. It is taken from a true story of a young couple and the husband was dying of cancer. The story went that the wife stated a man dressed in black with a pale white face walked into their room told the couple he was sorry and walked out. The wife followed him out and saw him get on the elevator. She called the nurses station and another nurse said she had seen him too. Because it was such a strange event the nurses called security and they searched the hospital and never found the man.The husband did not die that night. I heard the story through the grapevine so I’m sure there were quite a few changes from what really happen. But it did get my creative juices flowing.

    Thanks for all your support, Pam

  • R.B. Parsley on Feb 28, 2010

    Pam,
    Great story!!!! Loved it. You held my attention all the way to the end. Really scary stuff. This really makes one wonder. My grandmother was 89 when she died. A few months before her death the family decided to put her in a nursing home. In the mean time my mom and dad decided to let her stay with them. After dad and mom fixed up a room for her, they went to the nursing home to tell her. My mom said, “Mom, you’ll be going home with me Monday.” My grandmother looked up at her, and said, “No I won’t.” Two days later, on Sunday, she died. Its like death told her in advance he would be coming for her. Again, Great story Pam.

    Randy

  • Michael Eboh on Mar 1, 2010

    Great share!

  • sambhafusia on Mar 1, 2010

    Interesting read dear….excellent share..

  • albert1jemi on Mar 1, 2010

    good one

  • Ruby Hawk on Mar 1, 2010

    Loved the story, when my granddad was dying my dad came to his bedside and told granddad to hurry up and come on that he was waiting. We who were there didn’t see daddy but we had no doubt that granddad did. We heard the conversation on granddad’s side.

  • drelayaraja on Mar 1, 2010

    Wonderful poetry :)

  • clay hurtubise on Mar 2, 2010

    Well done.
    Could flush this out with more backstory and it’d make a nice short story.
    Thanks,
    Clay

  • clay hurtubise on Mar 2, 2010

    Well done.
    Could flush this out with more backstory and it\’d make a nice short story.
    Thanks,
    Clay

  • clay hurtubise on Mar 2, 2010

    Well done.
    Could flush this out with more backstory and it\\\’d make a nice short story.
    Thanks,
    Clay

  • Moses Ingram on Mar 3, 2010

    Pam, You have read many of my stories, I’m sure you know that I loved this..

  • Lord Banks on Mar 6, 2010

    Excellent work well done, LB

  • Ruby Hawk on Mar 10, 2010

    another I like,

  • zoeyclark on Mar 14, 2010

    This is beyond spooky. But it is well told.

  • J J Neuman on Mar 14, 2010

    Wow…very gripping! I love stories where the ending is a little cloudy….I still am thinking why the man (or whatever it was) said I’m sorry….was it sorry for the young man who was passing away? Or sorry for the young woman because of the loss? Nice work….

  • Karen Gross on Mar 24, 2010

    Great story, well told. I have heard many stories about people who see angels or hear music or brilliant colours just before they die. I haven’t heard many where family members or staff have also seen otherworldly beings, but I would not discount it. I liked this article.

  • papaleng on Jul 5, 2010

    you have shared such a beautiful story.

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