Story of the last virgin maiden!

         Looking out of the Las Vegas widow of my penthouse suite, I sighed a very heavy sigh. The outtake of breath blowing the sheets of paper I’d been sketching on, to the floor. I watched as couples going into the Viva Las Vegas Wedding Chapel, laughed and giggled at one another as Elvis came out to greet them.

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         “Why is it Matilda that I am the only virgin maiden left in the world?” I asked my maid.

         “Why, it is not for me to say mistress.”  Matilda replied but I could tell she was lying to me.

         “Oh come on, you have been with this family for years. Why did my father lock me in here? All I remember is that the red rose in our old garden gave off a strange glow then I was banished here.

         “You will know all in good time, Rapmistress. Now you are over tiring yourself, why not take a nap?”

         I wondered over to my full-length mirror and looked hard at my reflection. I had a stack of magazines on my bed and I was easily in the top department for looks. I had long golden hair that fell around my body and covered me like a golden cloak.  My breasts were pert and full. Down from my breasts my neat little waist led to the flair of my hips. Some may say it was an hourglass figure, supposedly the most sought after figure by men, so where were they?

         My father had locked me in this very nice Penthouse suite when I was 15 years old, I am now 21 and although I long to get out of here I can’t until my price comes and falls madly in love with me. I joined a few Internet dating sites and uploaded my photograph but I have had no replies.

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  • The Last Ogre on Nov 1, 2009

    Interesting story. Very well written. Thank you.

  • ken bultman on Nov 1, 2009

    That is one helluva beautiful story. My heart goes where the wild goose goes.

  • Francois Hagnere on Nov 1, 2009

    Very well narrated story. Thank you Lilyrose.

  • Christine Ramsay on Nov 1, 2009

    That is a lovely story. I would love to hear what happened next.

    Christine

  • deep blue on Nov 1, 2009

    I like the story, even the forest isn’t virgin anymore. Maybe that’s what urged business tycoon Richard Branson to name his company Virgin Group Ltd to oversee all his Virgin ventures; airways, records, media, etc…out of his frustration of not seeing a virgin maiden to date.

  • CaSundara on Nov 1, 2009

    Wow, you have such a bizarre imagination! Cool story, Lilyrose!

  • johnnydod on Nov 1, 2009

    wow good story well done, and so well written

  • alc on Nov 1, 2009

    By the title I wasn’t expecting a story as great as this! It was excellent!

  • diamondpoet on Nov 1, 2009

    Lovely story and very well written, thanks for sharing.

  • diamondpoet on Nov 1, 2009

    That was a Lovely story and very well written, thanks for sharing.

  • martinpm on Nov 1, 2009

    Loved your story. Very well executed.

  • T.Rex McGoogle on Nov 1, 2009

    You goosed my laughing place with that. Nice ending. A very good writing job. Even tittilating along the way.

  • Sourav on Nov 1, 2009

    This is a good story. well written

  • Lostash on Nov 1, 2009

    I just love a witch with an ASBO!!! My sort of girl!!!

  • Ruby Hawk on Nov 1, 2009

    What a sweet fairy tale, just lovely.

  • Tanya Wallace on Nov 1, 2009

    What a very creative and imaginative tale!! Fantastic work Lilly! The ending took a wonderful turn and one I don’t think anyone could have seen coming!!

  • Vikram Chhabra on Nov 2, 2009

    Very demonstrative of your sensual creativity. Your adding of mythical dimensions in a modern day setting was delightful!!

  • Jane Jane on Nov 3, 2009

    very interesting and poor parents.

  • Themax on Nov 3, 2009

    very good and interesting,Thanks for sharing :)

  • STEVE666 on Nov 4, 2009

    Nice little story, Lily—very imaginative.
    Funny enough, you don’t see any snow-geese in Birmingham, or virgin-maidens, so perhaps your tale as a ring of truth.

  • Authoress Terry E. Lyle on Dec 1, 2009

    Interesting story that I enjoyed reading. :)

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