Love’s lucid awakening…

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Iridescent clouds caressed by fading sunlight linger in the darkening sky, creating a canopy over golden fields. The wispy winds whisper, causing the grass to gently dance, as two lovers promenade, hand in hand, lost in each others silence. 

Mina breathed in deep, affection dwelling in her bosom. She glanced up at Hwang, warmth kissing her body. Oh, how she loved to hold hands with him, her petite hand clasped protectively in his larger one. It made her giddy with delight, her heart pounding rapturously, as they leisurely walked. She felt so safe with him, that nothing could touch her, as long as he was by her side, only a breath away…

Hwang suddenly stops, his gaze heavenward, lost in thought. Mina looks quizzically at him, her brown eyes brimming with curiosity. She sees the corners of his mouth curl upward, a look of deep affection on his face. He glances back at her, his dark eyes lingering, enfolding her.

Mina trembles, her bosom heaving, feeling his smoldering eyes upon her. She felt so utterly naked and exposed, the way he was looking at her, like he could see deep within her being. Hwang places a hand on her cheek, gently caressing, causing her to give a tiny gasp. His fingers then delicately trace her lips, being oh so gentle. She murmurs plaintively, her eyes shining wistfully. His mouth descends upon hers – a tender, loving kiss. Mina presses herself against him, eliciting a groan deep within him. The kisses soon becomes more insistent, as Hwang softly lays her down in the golden field, the sun slowly fading below the horizon, enveloping them in warm glow…bidding them sweet good night.

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  • giftarist on Aug 15, 2009

    You are very good in playing words.

  • ken bultman on Aug 15, 2009

    No wonder with such a heaving bosom.

  • Christine Ramsay on Aug 15, 2009

    Such a beautiful, sensual and romantic piece. Lovely work.

    Christine

  • papaleng on Aug 15, 2009

    lovely and romantic!

  • Shirley Shuler on Aug 15, 2009

    Hi Lady Sunshine, you haven’t missed a beat, Mina and Hwang are as romantic and lovely as ever, well written as always!!

  • Lostash on Aug 15, 2009

    Quite the romantic aren’t you!

  • Ruby Hawk on Aug 16, 2009

    Ohhhh, so romantic, what a sweet story.

  • Collette Edwards on Aug 17, 2009

    Is it getting warm in here??? very good write and very romantic, LOVE IT!!!

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