I always wanted to write a sort of book so… please tell me if you liked it :)

Long ago in a land far, far away a young child was born. He’s parents called him Cailan. He grew up like all the other children, work at the land, eat, sleep, until one day. That one day changed he’s whole life. A guy with a long beard came to he’s village and he knocked on their door. They let him sleep in their house for some days until the monsters came.   It were 5 foot tall creatures from the south. They’re eyes we’re red and they had big hands and feet. They looted the village and burned it down, took the women and the children for slavery. But they forget Cailan, which hided in the closet. With he’s fader murdered and he’s mother took away. He started crying. Something he didn’t do for five years now. He was 15. Old enouch to carry he’s fathers old armour and weapons. He found a horse hiding somewhere and ride away to the closest city to ask help from the Lord.

He entered the room where the Lord was en bow down for him and asked ‘My Lord, my village was just burned down by creatures from the hell.’ The Lord answered him with the words “What do you think we can do, child. We are already fighting so long against those  creatures. ‘M’lord ,’ said Cailan,’ why can’t you just recruit me in your army. From all the work in the fields I’m strong enough to carry armor.’ ‘Then so it be, I  recruit you to my army to fight against the creatures from the hell, but you need to swear an oath to me. Repeat the words I say, by joining this army, I will promise that I will protect the weaks with my weapons, and use it for the good and against the evil.’ He repeated the words. ‘I need to set you in a company that is going on a mission to their lair, I will send you within a day.

If you liked it please tell me and if I will need to make a sequel on it. Tips are welcome                              

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