Based on a true story…

“Hey Lauren could you pass me that tube” “Sure Melanie” ” Hey do you wanna make a whirlpool”, I ask Lauren.  “Sure.”  So Lauren, Kenny, Natalie, and I start to make a whirlpool.  “Lauren, Kenny is chasing us”, I scream. “Climb over the ladder on the other side of the pool” “Okay”, Lauren says.  So me and Lauren climb over the ladder then we climb over the gate. ” Ow, my toe”, I yell. We go on the pool deck and jump back in the pool. We totally forgot that Kenny was still in the pool so we climb the ladder and the gate again and by that time Natalie’s grandma was there to pick her up. So me, Lauren, and Kenny just mess around in the pool before we get out. I grab my towel and race up to the deck. Everybody follows me up. Then I realize that  I forgot my glasses. By the time I got back down to the pool I remember that I was supposed to grab the keys. I was too tired to run all the way back up there so I climb over the gate. I figured I would be just fine since I climbed over the gate twice before. Boy was I wrong. I made it over the gate. I grabbed my glasses and put them on. I stepped on the bench to climb back over, but at the top of the gate my bathing suit got caught. It ripped and then I fell down to the hard ground. I sreamed. My mom came down and said I was fine. But boy she was also wrong…….    (read the end in the story called The locked gate 2)

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