Comments on: The Lolly Shop

By: Alice Markie

Alice Markie — Sun, 13 Jan 2008 05:49:18 +0000

Je l’aime It are a hippin’ and a hoppin’ to da funky funky beat lolol

By: Judy Sheldon-Walker

Judy Sheldon-Walker — Mon, 03 Dec 2007 17:01:24 +0000

What ever happened to Frank, and his mom? Beautiful writing, but it needs a sequel.

By: Nick Kenney

Nick Kenney — Fri, 19 Oct 2007 12:11:20 +0000

Beautifully written! I agree with everyone else…poor Frank! I think we all know how he feels…been there, done that! Am waiting for the sequel, Lucy!

By: beauley, Lucien

beauley, Lucien — Sat, 11 Aug 2007 02:48:25 +0000

Just wanted to say, I enjoyed this wonderful “short story. You are th ebest. I wrote quite a lenghty comment earlier. Somehow it got lost ina “black hole”…or something. Keep writing.

By: Gail Nobles

Gail Nobles — Sat, 21 Jul 2007 15:00:37 +0000

Loved your story.

By: lanne

lanne — Wed, 18 Jul 2007 03:19:44 +0000

Thanks for your kind comments.The poems on here are 10-15 yrs old. Hope I can still do it. Laurie

By: Anonymous

Anonymous — Tue, 17 Jul 2007 18:22:07 +0000

I am with the others….when do we get to read part 2? Very nice Lucy!

By: shaun ashcroft

shaun ashcroft — Thu, 12 Jul 2007 00:35:46 +0000

My saliva glands started to work overtime reading this. Well done.

By: francie

francie — Mon, 09 Jul 2007 19:53:54 +0000

Great story! I especially liked how descriptive you wrote it all, I felt very much a part of it. As a young girl I had a favorite corner candy store…I wonder if that owner felt as poor,dear,Frank did? I’m “staying tuned”…

By: lizzie2uk

lizzie2uk — Sun, 08 Jul 2007 19:27:45 +0000

Yes, very well written