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The Mix Up

“Ahhh…….” I screamed

I was being dragged away by those three big girls. They had muscles the size of large truck with the power of an atomic bomb. They could have hurt me as easily as breaking a tooth pick.

My head was barely hanging on my neck as it was scrapped on the hard ground. I could smell my fresh blood dripping of my torn neck. As they walked, I wondered what the girls were planning to do to me. I could sense many different ideas jumping around in their thick skulls.

Suddenly, I notice a change in the atmosphere. There were less people and it became dark with steam covering the large trunks of the native trees. The girls dropped my legs and the leader grabbed me by the collar and smashed me against a broken wall which appeared out of no where.

“Wha…..what…..what are you going to do to me?” I asked in terror.

“We ain’t going to do nothing to ya mate unless you stop bullying my brother. You hear. You touch him or even talk to him and I’ll smash your head.” She replied in a tough, angry voice.

“Y…….Your brother? But I never touched him. What’s his name?” I question feeling a bug crawl down my spine.

“His name is Jonah Johnson. He told me you were teasing him about his flab. Well let me tell ya something mate nobody except me teases Johan Johnson. Av you got it?” She demanded. 

I kept silent wondering what to say. I didn’t know what she was talking about.

She then threw me to the floor with a loud yell.

“If he comes to me whining, your dead mate.” She then left with her friends with out a word.

I didn’t know what to do. I had a massive erg to cry but I stayed strong and stood up. I have to get out of the place I was in. I tried to remember which way the girls went they left but the throw to the ground had a huge impact on my head. It was still spinning slightly as I got up. I decided the best thing to do was to wonder around until I can see my path home.

After about one hour, I met a man who led me out of “The Park” as he called it and in less than three minutes I was safe at home. As soon as I saw mum, I ran to her and gave her a big hug. To everyone else it had only been one hour since the school bell had rung, but to me it felt so much longer.

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