This is a short story I wrote about note passing.

I knew something was odd right when I entered the room. I could tell someone had fidgeted with my belongings at my desk. I had been to lunch and when I returned to my English room, I found it. The note. I checked everything; my binders, my backpack, and finally, my pencil pouch. I saw the note right when I opened it. I was a white, wrinkled, square-piece of paper that had been folded in half 2 times. It read something along the lines of:

“ Tiffi, I can’t stop thinking about you. I want  you so much. SA”.

                Of course, the being that I am, I played this off really cool. I stuck the love letter into my back pocket and waited until the period was almost over. Then, I talked to John, my classmate sitting to the right of me and I asked him who it could be and what I should do. He said to just keep a clear head and let the Secret Admirer make their next move. I took his advice and waited.

End of Part 1

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  • LCM Linda on Jan 28, 2011

    Good advice from John. :D

  • Ima Vee on Jan 29, 2011

    interesting…looking forward for part 2

  • lxdollarsxl on Jan 29, 2011

    enjoyed the read waiting for part 2 as well

  • mtrguanlao on Jan 29, 2011

    Haha,sounds so interesting! I will sure wait for the part two,thanks for sharing this tiffi!

  • MaxBuceo on Jan 29, 2011

    Great share, so nice. I like this post

  • The Quail 1957 on Jan 29, 2011

    Interesting story can’t wait for part two. Great article!

  • vishal06 on Jan 29, 2011

    great share nice story

  • Farzeela Fee Faisal on Jan 29, 2011

    Good one.

  • tonywriter on Jan 29, 2011

    great share and very well written article :)

  • papaleng on Jan 29, 2011

    nice one, wait to read part 2.

  • jemialbert on Jan 29, 2011

    gud one

  • DaYong on Jan 29, 2011

    Wow this is brilliant…. Please publish part 2soon!

  • anndavey650 on Jan 29, 2011

    WooHoo… who could it be? Nothing more delightfully delicious than a secret admirer… hope he’s gorgeous lol!

  • MountainGirl on Jan 29, 2011

    HAHA love it

  • tiffi on Jan 29, 2011

    @Anna Don’t be disappointed but it’s a girl. Tiffi is a guy lol

  • The Indian on Jan 29, 2011

    Interesting!

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