This is a short look at a friends way of dealing with the history of his native heritage. He had toured a site where many of his people had been killed by US soldiers.

To the other people milling around, he looked just like one of them.  He was colored by the sun, a bronze that went skin deep. His hair was trimmed to just below his shoulder blades and held in place by a black leather strap. At odds with that were his blue eyes that could sparkle with his mother’s laughter.

He stood relaxed as the crowd dwindled to a calm few. His gaze read the plaques that told the story of a people slaughtered just because they were different and had pride in who they were. He thought of the stories told by his grandparents as they were told to them. History’s lessons forgotten by so many still sang in his soul.

His eyes shifted to take in the landscape. No marks scared the landscape to show the pain felt by strong women left to tend the home fires. No blood stained the vegetation to show where children lay scared and dying. There was nothing to show the torture that the elders had endured.

As he scanned the horizon the sunset coloring everything in hues of gold and red. The scene in front of him shifted just a bit. He watched as mothers tanned the hides of deer, stood beside the fires tending the stews, and weaving stories as they weaved blankets.

He saw the images of children playing games that would teach them to be as strong as their parents. They laughed and played free from the worry of men in army pants. He saw the delight cross their face as they saw the warriors return home.

The shift came again and this time he saw men in clean coats and bloodstained shirts. He saw the burned remains of homes and families. He saw the crazy celebration of the killing machine.

He knew the visions were a gift. He would use it to tell the story of the great people and the lesser men. He did not have the words in him that others used to pass the past on. Instead, he would use his gift. His mother’s blue eyes were not all she gave him and he would use what she had taught him to show others what had marred this sacred space.

He went home and started his task. The paint and canvas transformed into pictures of families together in both life and later in death. They became storyboards of horror, fear and pain. However, in the last painting he showed the spirit of a people in a way that the murderers never saw.

It showed many faces, some faded by the blood of newcomers. They were the faces of business, politics, teaching, and doctors. They were the faces of children who do not understand the ways of the past but will carry the dead’s promise into the future. They were the faces of a nation, of a people, of hope.

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  • Katien on Sep 2, 2009

    Very moving. So well described, I was there with him!

  • alc on Sep 3, 2009

    Very descriptive! An enjoyable read!

  • David Crerand on Sep 3, 2009

    Fantastic! You did an excellent job telling this story. It was visual and visceral and moving! Great job! I look forward to reading more of your work!

  • spiritwalker on Sep 6, 2009

    I sometimes find the visions 2 b a curse. It seems all u can do is watch never able 2 stop the pain until u r able to change the heart of man. Guess this is where hope comes in.

  • Duff D Moss on Sep 8, 2009

    Well told. Heartbreaking too.

  • bruce connolly on Sep 8, 2009

    very well done, it shows a great depth and understanding. it is something a child of mine may have done.

  • raptor22 on Sep 8, 2009

    Well written.

  • B.S. Kitty on Sep 8, 2009

    :)

  • BradONeill on Sep 9, 2009

    Interesting story, well told. Terrific ending.

    Faces faded by the blood of newcomers is a very interesting way to put the integration of cultures.

  • Brenda Nelson on Sep 9, 2009

    Very sad what our forefathers did when they took this land.

  • oldster on Sep 9, 2009

    Painted a good picture yourself TL–very good.

  • Rod Ferrandino on Sep 11, 2009

    Your work took me to the point where people stolen from their own homes were used to steal the homes of others, as were the Buffalo Soldiers that Bob Marley sings about.

  • Nikita K on Sep 11, 2009

    Wonderful language in a story but absolutely heart shattering – you’ve got all the right elements for a perfect story!

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