The start of something big.

I left her waiting in the hall and bid my farewells to my other guests, it had been one of those educated party’s with lots of philosophical conjectures,  after we had put the world to rights my guests began to drift off one by one until only a few remained.

I had noticed her in a corner and had made my presence know  to her, it turned out she had been stood up and as it happened we had clicked ,so after a few niceties, we both had come to realised the longing in both our hearts , she in my mind was a goddess and why in hell would any right minded guy leave her in the lerch?

I persuaded her to stay after the last guest had gone and then we might have a drink together and hopefully get to know each other a little better she agreed and as I hurried the other guests home my anticipation level along with the unknown pleasure of discovery heightened to an almost unbearable state.

The moment came, we made our way to the little lounge and she settled down on the settee, a glass of Champaign? I asked “oh’ I would love one she replied, and so began the start of the most wonderful night of my life .

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  • lillyrose on Oct 29, 2009

    Awwww… you spoil sport, I wanted more!!! it was just getting juicy.

  • ken bultman on Oct 29, 2009

    Very nice. I hope this is part one.

  • diamondpoet on Oct 29, 2009

    That wasn’t nice to just leave use dangling like that.

  • Christine Ramsay on Oct 29, 2009

    Aah! You left us on the brink. What happened then?

    Christine

  • Emma Green on Oct 29, 2009

    Very much left on a cliffhanger!!! Look forward to the next part?

  • Tanya Wallace on Oct 29, 2009

    Terrific write but I demand more! lol

  • LoveDoctor on Oct 30, 2009

    Why did u leave me in suspense johnny? Very well written.

  • papaleng on Oct 30, 2009

    Superb, and my heart goes with the others, Why did you left us in a quandary?

  • Darla Cooke on Oct 30, 2009

    Interesting story.

  • LOVELYHONEY on Oct 31, 2009

    read it good

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