Alone and terrified.

 

The sky was dark blue, and approaching across the horizon were storm clouds. I wondered how bad was this going to be, will the storm pass over? Within minutes, a constant pounding against my window pane was thumping loudly as if an intruder was trying to get in.

Huddled beneath my blankets, I trembled as my lights began to flicker, with the loud emergency sirens blaring in the distance. How long would the storm last? How long would it devastate everything in its path?

A cold eerie silence came upon the room. Then in an instant, a flash of blinding lightning filled the room, followed by a crackling and rumbling of thunder. The hairs on my neck became prickly, because of my fear of the storm. All alone and frightened, I began to pray for sleep, so I could ride out the storm peacefully in my slumber.

I scrambled to find a sleeping pill because the tension intensified.  I’m not sure of whether there will be extensive damage to my home or injuries to myself because I was caught in the path of the storm. Loud thunder rumbling and lightning illuminating the room in its scary brightness, as car horns were going off and strong gusty sounds of the wind blew outside, knocking things around against my home.

As I listened to the emergency sirens going off in the distance, I wondered why I didn’t heed the evacuation warnings that were made all day long. I didn’t listen and now I find myself stuck in the path of the storm. I thought I would be brave enough to stay so I could watch my possessions, which I now find underwater, as I scramble to the roof.  I hope someone will be brave enough to venture out to find me, while I am stuck in the path of the storm.

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  • LoveDoctorLoveGoodBye on Nov 18, 2009

    Great poem as well. Keep publishing:)

  • diamondpoet on Nov 18, 2009

    Interesting story.

  • Authoress Terry E. Lyle on Nov 18, 2009

    If vou ever lived thru a disaster like Katrina, if have to leave devastating memories.

  • lillyrose on Nov 18, 2009

    nicely done.

  • Teves on Nov 18, 2009

    Nice one…

  • cebuanaeyez on Nov 18, 2009

    Great writing with its details and images

  • Tracy on Nov 19, 2009

    That was very interesting and well written.

  • Frances Lawrence on Nov 19, 2009

    A very well written piece, what a dreadful situation.

  • Kristie Leong MD on Nov 19, 2009

    Very scary, but beautifully written.

  • ken bultman on Nov 20, 2009

    Very good imagery of fright and hindsight. We tried unsuccessfully to ride out Hurricane Charlie. We survived; the house did not.

  • nutmegeyes on Nov 20, 2009

    Really good article even thou tragic.

  • Authoress Terry E. Lyle on Nov 22, 2009

    The weather is starting to change again, but this time I’ll make better choices and be more wise about preparation, and hesitations when I need to giddy-up-and-go!!! :)

  • V rank on Nov 29, 2009

    Your descriptions in this article are very vivid… You have a good sense of imagery, which you incorporated with a good choice of words…

  • athena goodlight on Dec 1, 2009

    Creatively written. Good one!

  • Snuggles85 on Dec 3, 2009

    Very nice work, keep it up. :)

  • CA Johnson on Jan 4, 2010

    This is very good. I have never been through a storm like that, but I can only imagine how terrifying it must have been.

  • Carolina girl 53 on Feb 7, 2010

    WOW..It seems as if I was actually there very good’

  • Green thumb on Mar 29, 2010

    Wonderful details that brings past winters and difficult times to focus such as flooding that I had experienced but not to that degree, this was an excellent portrait of the horror that can be inflicted by Mother Nature. “Two green thumbs up” for the imagery

  • Authoress Terry E. Lyle on Apr 5, 2010

    Natural disasters seems to be breaking out more frequently globally.

  • Authoress Terry E. Lyle on Apr 8, 2010

    The rains are coming again and hopefully they will subside, I do not want to go through another flooding condition. It’s very traumatic

  • nutmegeyes on Jun 26, 2010

    Hello,
    I like your vanity video, you look like your profile picture….I guess you know that you’re very attractive as well as talented.

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