The death of a friend.
A ghost story.

 Image RS Wing

 

  He swung, side to side, much like a timeless pendulum, as the maple branch creaked from the noose that now gripped him. With his head tilted and the complexion of death purple’s, the words, ‘fuck the world’  were visibly scrawled on his forehead, highlighted in red ink marker.

  The raccoons scurried as the dawn broke through the mornings slit headlong into the abyss of deaths grip. The stench of death hung in the balmy October air unregulated as an ominous face of defeat, disgust, all in distrust….all memories of a tormented soul mirrored within these dead eyes, baring no disguise.

  Mother, Ingeborg, cried as she dragged herself to him…broken, crippled and a need to cradle her first born. His wrists and inner forearms bore rope burns, the sign of possible last minute regret of self demise. I can only imagine his last breath as he desperately tried to wriggle out of his self imposed fate, almost feeling the horrid rope burns on my own naked flesh.

  Cold dead calm eyes of distant defeat and delirium possessed his heather flesh around stiffened bones, wriggled joints and grounded to nothingness here on earth. The antagonists drink from the temples chalice. Boundless that no boundless is all must realize the point, must that no reality is a sacrificial point back….tis sacrificial impatience.

  On that fateful Sunday morning, Ingeborg dragged herself to the kitchen, for her first pot of coffee. As the pot was brewing, she sat in her morning chair, near the picture window, ready to cast open the blinds, as to let the mornings sun soothe her lovely spirits. When she drew the blinds, she was aghast at what she bore witness to. Her eldest son, Buzzy, had hanged himself from a maple tree, outside the small yard they shared.

  That’s when all the nightmares re-emerged.

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  • XXElleXX on Apr 4, 2010

    Profound writing .. awe peculiar to the work of great writers Rich :-)

  • STEVE666 on Apr 5, 2010

    Powerful subject-matter—well written, Rich.

  • Atanacio on Apr 6, 2010

    Rich this was a strong powerful write, the visuals were graphic, but just enough to get your point across I loved it now on to the 2nd entry :)

  • AlmaG on Apr 10, 2010

    Simply excellent! :)

  • Mr. Africa on Apr 10, 2010

    Wow I love this!

  • jkllewthor on Apr 11, 2010

    Creepy, morbid atmosphere….love it!

  • Ruby Hawk on Apr 12, 2010

    Dark and dire, It’s a good story.

  • Lauren Axelrod on Apr 21, 2010

    Richard you always have a way of setting a scene that\’s truly ominous and eery. This was a superb piece and I tweeted it.

  • T. S. Lewis on May 3, 2010

    Powerful stuff. I would say more but your talent says it all.

  • flame007 on May 10, 2010

    good write

  • Devil Dylan on May 15, 2010

    nicely written here..

  • Thomas Hodge on May 29, 2010

    well done

  • Bo Russo on Jun 7, 2010

    You really took me there, nice descriptive details.

  • Intuitive on Jun 16, 2010

    woo, eerie, sets your imagination running. liked it, now on to the second.

  • zoeyclark on Jul 12, 2010

    please tell me this is fiction.
    if it is, it is almost too powerful to be just fiction.
    still, it is very, very depressing:)

  • 2brnt2b on Dec 23, 2010

    Scarry.

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