60 word story.

He had planned everything. Being life insurance beneficiary, avoiding the fingerprints, setting up alibis, planning for red herrings, bribing the right men. Everything.

Yet he was being frisked in his own front yard, bending over his Bentley’s hood as the police checked the car’s booty.

It’s a shame he didn’t plan how to do dispose his brother’s body on time.

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  • vishakha on Nov 14, 2009

    :) Niceeee

  • Puja on Nov 15, 2009

    hehehe…nice…:D

  • crucisis on Nov 15, 2009

    thank you :P

  • V rank on Nov 17, 2009

    Mind-buggling… i left me thinking beyond the nine dots…

  • V rank on Nov 17, 2009

    Mind-buggling… it kept thinking beyond the nine dots… good prowess though…

  • crucisis on Nov 17, 2009

    thank you for reading, franklin. btw nine dots?

  • karan on Dec 19, 2009

    Hmmmmmm nice Kshama i

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