The plan.

The plan was simple,Everything had to change.Nothing was going to be the same again.He had being living a life with his eyes closed most of the time and now everything was going to change.He realised that this change would be the hardest thing he would ever have to do.He had build a rock solid comfort zone around himself and every thing was about to be pulled down to the ground.The first thing was to find someone to move in with him as that would half the rent.The next thing was giving up the cigarettes which was killing him anyway so if he wanted any kind of healthy life ,he knew they had to go.Next was the drink!Since a young man, he had enjoyed a couple of drinks after work to relax and then on his days off were spent in the pub, drinking with his friends.It was all becoming pointless and boring.Nothing was changing and every week was the same thing with a constant hangover.He just had enough and knew that he had to stop.He decided that he would only have a drink on special occasions.He decided to join the gym and exercise,He would really needed to keep himself busy with all of these changes and anyway, he had heard the swimming pool was great .He would also need to change his diet as it consisted of burgers and chips for most of him working life and anyway he was spending too much on this rubbish.The last thing was to start a savings.He had never saved any money ever and wanted to some day, buy his own flat.He always wanted a car but didn’t think it necessary as he lived so close to his job.He remembered on plenty of occasions being asked by girls about owning a car and house and feeling really embarrassed about having nothing.

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       Over the next few weeks, he followed the plan.He found a guy to rent the other room,Was still off the cigarettes,Had joined the gym and was loving it,Was cooking for himself and he had a saving for the first time in his life.He allowed 50euros for entertainment,100euros for food and utilities,70euros for rent and electric,10euros for gym and 50euros for clothes each week.The rest went into savings.Out of 500euros ,He had 220 left.He was able to save 200euros a week and have 20euros left to buy a cd or rent a movie.Why didn’t he think of this before?He was finding it difficult to make these changes but his life was becoming more clear to him now.His work had improved,He looked great and for the first time in his life, He had 600euros in his savings account.Passing by an electrical shop ,he realised that he could purchase anything that the shop was selling and that felt so good…

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  • LoveDoctor on Nov 16, 2009

    Excellent article! Very inspirational and motivating. Change is good sometimes. I admire him for his strength to give up on eating junk food and his love for cigarettes. Eating a few burgers here and there is not so bad so it’s okay. Awesome that he took a step and joined the gym. As far as having drinks weekly with his friends, that is great. Enjoying yourself is a plus and we all deserve it once in a while. One of the best changes he could have made is saving money. Whether it is $5.00 a week or $10.00, having a savings account can make all the difference in the world especially these days with the current recession plus it gives you peace of mind. Lovely image of the pool. As for the boy, I advise him to keep visualizing that pool and it will be his one day.

  • carlos de la parra on Nov 16, 2009

    I think the plan is quite well formulated more as a plan itself,in the sense of the narrative,I see a first person character that decides to bring some changesof self improvement nature,but as a short story it fails to grow into it’s utmost potential,it lacks a major challenge beyond escaping boredom and reorganizing a pretty empty life style.It also fails to convey why had the character fallen into such a ghastly routine,what was so attractive about spending time with all these friends? Were they equally as boring? And furthermore,lacking the meat of the story,it fails to supply a twist giving a great end that could have saved it.You can do much better because at least you are able to supply an order to the sequence of facts.But keep in mind that the blank page is all the space in the universe,and opposed to real life that demands things such as status,money,personality,looks,coolness,and on and on,in writing you can conquer with only talent and imagination:and that is all the tools necessary for you to fill that blank page.Talent is free,but you must dare to use it.You must develop your imagination by asking: What if?…and set no limits to that.What if that watermelon exploded?…What if the pope had to parachute from a plane and landed into some totalitarian society where they would force him to work on a circus?…Visit
    http://www.themicrostories.blogspot,com and read into the endless possibilities that face us,start living more in the power of fantasy and it will set you free.The magic word is WORK.

  • ceegirl on Nov 16, 2009

    Great story, well written.

  • Priyanka Bhowmick on Nov 17, 2009

    really a wonderful story with a good moral msg in the end.. changes r really necessary to lead a gud lyf.. at least if we try to change then may b we find more happiness dan earlier…

  • Linda Lori on Nov 17, 2009

    Positive and uplifting read!

  • giftarist on Nov 17, 2009

    Inspiring!

  • Darla Cooke on Nov 17, 2009

    Very inspiring story!

  • PhoenixRox on Nov 21, 2009

    An inspiring piece that teaches us so much! Thanks Mikeyyyyy

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