A story I heard to share with you..

Once upon a time, there were these King and Queen, they had 7 beautiful daughters.  All the 7 princesses were waiting to be married to a handsome prince who will be visiting them at the palace and he will pick one of them as his wife.  The King gave each of them 100 pieces of beautiful hairclips, so that they can doll up themselves on the big day.

The first princess lost one of the hairclips, she then stole one from the second princess.  The second princess noticed one of the hairclips was missing, she also did the same, stole from the third princess, so on and so forth.  The 7th princess, who was the last one, found that she has lost one of the hairclips, but she just let it be and with 99 hairclips she put on her hair.

On the big day, when the prince arrived, all the princesses with the beautiful hairclips, were introduced to the handsome prince.  The prince did not know who to pick as the wife as all were very beautiful, especially with the beautiful hairclips.  Suddenly the 7th princess, due to shortage of one hairclip, all the clips could not support the heavy hair, all the hairclips dropped and WOW…. so beautiful, when her hair was let down, very shinny and curly… the prince was attracted by her beautiful thick hair and he finally picked her as the wife.

Moral of the story :

(1)  We need not be perfect, with shortage of 1 hairclip, no problem.

(2)  Don’t cheat by stealing from others.

(3)  Take good care of your belongings, so that they won’t be easily stolen.

(4)  Some hair are really funny, must support with 100 hair clips, 99 cannot support, wonder why.

(5)  Some prince really not decisive when making decision.

(6)  Hope you can smile a little and be happy, when reading this story and won’t get frustrated with it, if yes, I am sorry about it, this story I really heard it somewhere, but I modify it now.

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Comments (9)
  • Darla Cooke on Nov 3, 2009

    Nice story.

  • Tanya Wallace on Nov 3, 2009

    Loved it Star and you added bit at the bottom,so humorous!! Gave me a massive smile because I was thinking the same things.Good stuff!!

  • CA Johnson on Nov 3, 2009

    I loved the story. It really did make me smile. I agree that we should take care of our things because you never know when someone is lurking around ready to take it.

  • Eunice Tan on Nov 3, 2009

    Nice story. However i’m imagining my own hair, thick and heavy, think I need more than 100 harirclips.

  • giftarist on Nov 4, 2009

    I agree with CA, Thanks for sharing this!

  • Teves on Nov 4, 2009

    Nice poem…

  • Jane Jane on Nov 4, 2009

    I smiled.

  • gaby7 on Jan 26, 2011

    A beautiful story!

  • LCM Linda on Jun 12, 2011

    Interesting story. I like the moral no. 1 – 3, particularly no. 1. Being a perfectionist could be a flaw itself.

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