My favorite young ballroom dancer Alexis from ” Alexis” and “Make Up Your Mind” is back with another tale. This time she faces a strange dilemma. What is the Promised Dance?

“Andy!” Alexis growled between bites of cereal. “Let me eat!”

“We only have eight weeks.”

“Again, why me?”

“It’s almost the end of my hundred years. I have to fulfill my promise. Alexis, you fit the>poem perfectly. Call it destiny.”

“And it has to be the venous waltz?”

“Viennese Waltz.” Andy said with laughter.

“Why?” Alexis argued, “Do you think just because my parents teach ballroom dancingthat I know all the dances? Andy, go and haunt the ballroom!”

“Eight weeks, Alexis.” Andy said as he slowly faded away.” Only eight more weeks.”

I remember the day we found our perfect house. My parents had searched for months for a place with enough room for a studio and our home. The old plantation on the bay had everything we needed, including a ballroom. The polished oak floors and French doors with a view of the bay made it perfect for the studio. It even came with its very own ghost: Andrew Jackson Montgomery III. The realtor told us the legend of the ballroom ghost started soon after his death in 1908.

“It is said he haunts the ballroom looking for his dance partner.”

“How charming.” Mom exclaimed, “Our very own dancing ghost.”

“Really.” stated Dad, “You can’t believe that silly old story. Everyone knows ghost aren’t real.”

I hoped Dad was right. I didn’t want to see a dancing ghost.

Once remodeling was completed, we moved in and opened the studio downstairs. We loved our new home and Bay View Dance was becoming a successful studio. New students seemed to be signing up daily. Plans were being made for a Dance Showcase. The date was set for May 24 th , the anniversary of our first full year in business. It was going to be a huge celebration with dinner and dancing. Students could invite their family and friends. The instructors would be performing dance routines. It was a busy and exciting time.

One afternoon while doing my homework, I spotted a cute young blond haired man sitting at a corner table. I thought he must be a new student waiting for his instructor. But something didn’t look right. His clothes were old and strange. Most of the students wore practice skirts for ladies and jeans for the guys. The corner man wore black pants with a long jacket and a strange looking tie. His shining black boots came all the way to his knees.

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  • PR Mace on Oct 4, 2008

    Sorry about the broken sentence structure. I did write or submit it this way. I have submitted a fix.

  • Glynis Smy on Oct 4, 2008

    Good work, I enjoyed this.

  • nobert soloria bermosa on Oct 4, 2008

    an enjoyable read,well done Pam

  • Heart Stone on Oct 4, 2008

    Entertaining!

  • Ruby Hawk on Oct 4, 2008

    Entertaining and spooky, my favorite kind of story.

  • Mary Contrary on Oct 4, 2008

    Well written!

  • PR Mace on Oct 7, 2008

    Hello everyone and thank you for checking out my story and for your support. Sorry about the broken sentence structure. I submitted a fix but it was not corrected. I have submitted another fix and sent a letter to the editor. Thanks again, Pam

  • goodselfme on Oct 7, 2008

    Interesting and fun read.

  • KathySpring on Oct 10, 2008

    This is entertaining, and incredibly well written
    Keep it Up

    Kathy

  • Jackie on Oct 11, 2008

    Had a hard time getting into it, maybe because I’m not into ballroom dancing. Had to read several times. Also for a short story it was lengthy. Sentence structure made reading a little difficult. OK but not my favorite

  • Loreta Dorington on Oct 25, 2008

    I can imagine how Alexis and the ghost dance in the ballroom. Nice plot. Thanks for sharing.

  • Eden Emersen on Nov 22, 2008

    I like the plot–especially the uniqueness of a ghost that needs the protagonist to fulfill his destiny. Very well-written!

  • Nick Kenney on Nov 23, 2008

    BRAVO! BRAVO! ENCOUR! ENCOUR!
    Awesome Pam, I loved it!!
    Thanks so much for the welcome back, I’ve missed you

  • swatilohani on Jun 24, 2009

    great

  • Christine Ramsay on Aug 7, 2009

    What a lovely story. It kept me captivated from start to finish. Well done.

    Christine

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