It was in the last quarter of the full moon.

I had been stalking my quarry for three days now and I felt I was very near to him

He was a very cunning adversary so I had to use all my guile to find him

It was in the last quarter of the full moon on a misty early morning in December

When I saw him, I had followed   his tracks to a clearing in the wood

There he stood, proud, his antlers glistening with the morning’s dew

He looked straight at me and I wondered what was in his mind

Did he think I was the intruder? I waited very still not to scare him

I prepared to shoot; I could see him in my sights my finger was on the trigger

The light was poor but I thought I could somehow use that to help my shot

I steadied myself; he raised his head in a proud movement

And looked away from me as if in defiance I slowly raised my camera and took my shot.

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  • papaleng on Dec 9, 2009

    a good story.

  • Christine Ramsay on Dec 9, 2009

    Wow ! is that the picture you took? It is wonderful. A great piece

    Christine

  • ken bultman on Dec 9, 2009

    Nice pic…good story.

  • Moira62 on Dec 9, 2009

    Wonderful piece of writing Johnny….look forward to seeing more..

  • V rank on Dec 9, 2009

    very articulate way of describing a very ordinary experience… Great work…

  • Darla Cooke on Dec 9, 2009

    Beautiful pic!

  • Judi Eddy on Dec 9, 2009

    Very good, thought the twist was good, thought you were with a gun,. excellent picture. Judi x

  • landiro on Dec 9, 2009

    I would like have the right words to say what i feel reading your post .. :) :) so neat and beauty…

  • Kelly DePaul on Dec 9, 2009

    Johnny,
    I waited with baited breath for you not to kill the lovely beast…

  • johnnydod on Dec 9, 2009

    I am a vegan Kelly,would never knowingly harm a living animal

  • diamondpoet on Dec 9, 2009

    Good write, I especially like the pictures.

  • Lady Sunshine on Dec 9, 2009

    The only shooting should be done by the camera. Great piece, Johnny.

  • Suzi Que xxx on Dec 9, 2009

    Amazingly done JD. took me right into the stillness of the scoping it in……for a great shot….to frame!!! lovely work to say the least. Although coming from a Hunter\’s point of view, my stillness would have been down a barrel for stew. lovely job. xxx

  • LOVELYHONEY on Dec 9, 2009

    glad u found him

  • Ruby Hawk on Dec 9, 2009

    I’m so glad it was a picture you shot and not the poor deer.

  • hollynoel001 on Dec 9, 2009

    what a great way to hold someone’s attention awesome work of words thank you!!

  • standingproud on Dec 10, 2009

    I do like Johnny,as all your writings are awesome to say the least…
    when we get married you could may be write words to say to me,so as I can keep them close to me heart for ever.
    and and and oh yes,show to ALL.xxxxx

  • johnnydod on Dec 10, 2009

    Well that’s the first time I have been proposed to”On-line”hahahaha

  • PhoenixRox on Dec 11, 2009

    The moment I read ’shoot’, I went – Oh no! I am so glad that you are a vegan and that was your camera. What a shot. It is like magic. :)

  • Moneypenny on Dec 11, 2009

    the ground looks frosty in that pic Johnnydod, so guess it wasn’t reindeer…………………….

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