A Story Which Shall Be Published In Chapters.
This Are The First Two Chapters. All I need are a set of honest comments, so that I will know how to continue with the story.

As the news was finishing Regnold was just closing his mouth which had been left open in wonder and amazement for the last ten minutes and unknowingly he dropped off his bottle of beer from his hand which did plummet in a fatal manner, producing a cacophonic sound which called attention of his wife. She rushed to the parlor quickly to see what was going on “what’s the matter darling? She asked. “the monkey…, the monkey Moscoo was actually taken away by Aliens, wwiTV just confirmed that” Standing up in a dawdling motion, he hit the table and shouted “ I’ll trace them, no matter where the are, Aliens or no Aliens, Moscoo shall come back to me!!!” Helen began bending down her heard as though she wanted to lament, then suddenly she burst into an intimidating laughter. This nearly caused Regnold to explode in rage and fury, he scattered his bottle on the floor, seeing that, Helen flee into the room and closed the door.

            Regnold rushed to his computer to Browse over the world wide web for archives on Aliens, first of all he saw a movie by James Cameron titled Aliens, but that is not what he was looking for, he searched and searched for factual info on UFOs, he began reading some info on how the American military sector had detected an unidentified flying object, they destroyed it immediately, after, confirmation came from the NASA saying that it was a secret internal satellite lunched for political purposes and was not supposed to be destroyed, the problem was however solved. Still searching for any links with aliens such as the Mugglers and any thing resembling their description, nothing relevant seemed to be coming up.

After about three hours of continuous research nothing wanted to show up, and then Regnold decided it was finally time for his system to have some rest, closing all the tabs he came to his yahoo account tab which showed something, it was news related, entitled “Relics of Aliens In St. Petersburg Square”. He anxiously clicked on it, taking in a breath of relief; it continued “Device found around the St. Petersburg Square, it is suspected that it was dropped off mistakenly by the Aliens. Space engineers from many European and American countries have tried to decode it to no avail. Nobody has succeeded to gain access into the info in it, all they could discover was to trace the routes of the device, that is where it came from, they discovered that it had traveled exactly an equal distance between the fourth and firth planet of the outer milky way galaxy, that exactly corresponds to the Trez Galaxy, therefore the Aliens came from Trez. Anybody who thinks he shall be of help to the project can report to the St. Petersburg Square with his team. The Prime Minister Gordon Bajnai has promised 2000.000HUF to anybody who succeeds to decode the code”

Regnold felt better after reading all that information, he did not know how he was gonna crack that information, he had no devices, but he knew no matter which way, he had to get that info in that device, it was already 2:30A.M. He decided to have some time of rest before he went on to the place where the new device had been found.

THANKS FOR READING. NEXT CHAPTERS:

The Hunt Continues.(chapter3)

Cracking The Alienic Code.(chapter4)

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  • jaysonv on Dec 24, 2009

    Great post.. i like it.. Thanks!
    -Merry Christmas!!!

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