I wrote this for English class. I guess it’s pretty intense! I hope you enjoy!

THE SECRET LIFE OF BRANDON

Six years ago

It was killing him. The secret was eating away at nine-year-old Brandon Murphy’s conscience like a middle-aged, single, overweight woman at an all-you-can-eat buffet. He knew he couldn’t tell anyone, even though he felt that he needed to in order to keep his brain unstressed.  Being a kid he wasn’t the best at making decisions, and this would come to be the worst of his life.

Brandon was not very intimidating, especially in school. Kids would pick and beat on him because he was short and lanky.  Other than these problems, Brandon did fantastic in school. He got good grades and was always paying attention as much as he could.

Brandon’s home life was tragic. His mother died when he was just a toddler, around the age of three, in a plane crash on her way to a business meeting in Bangkok, Thailand. Brandon still had fond memories of his mother singing to him in his bed, but he knew that “alea jacta est”. On a Wednesday evening, Brandon’s father had also died from three fatal gunshot wounds to the chest, but no one knew of that yet.

 Brandon’s teacher, Mrs. Denstien, noticed that on Thursday Brandon was acting more apathetic than usual. The bell rings and Mrs. Denstien speaks.

“Class you are excused, except for Brandon, please see me after class.”

About 6 minutes after the bell Brandon came back to the classroom and glared at his teacher with apathy.

“You wanted to see me?” Brandon asked with a rude attitude.

“Yes, is everything alright, Brandon?”

“Uh, yeah I’m fine. Why?”

“You just seem to be acting different than usual.”

Brandon could tell that Mrs. Denstien really did care about him.  She saw that Brandon was beginning to open up.

“Well, it’s just that…” Brandon couldn’t find the strength to reveal his secret.

“Never mind, nothing’s wrong.” He quickly ended.

“Alright Brandon, but I just want you to know that you can tell me anything, do you understand?”

“Sure.” Brandon replied, now acting apathetic again.

“Now you better call your father to come pick you up.”

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  • Chelsea :) on May 4, 2009

    Hey girrl! This is such a great story! It should be a new book!

  • Ashley Hyland on May 4, 2009

    This is a very good and suspenseful story. You should consider sending it to a company to make it a book. Maybe you will actually get paid! It is a unique thriller that I’m sure no one has ever really thought of. God luck on future work.
    -Ashley

  • Ashley Hyland on May 4, 2009

    This is a very good and suspenseful story. You should consider sending it to a company to make it a book. Maybe you will actually get paid! It is a unique thriller that I’m sure no one has ever really thought of. God luck on future work.
    -Ashley

  • Joey on May 7, 2009

    This is a very good story. I hope you go far in the writing world.

  • Medium-Sized Billy on May 8, 2009

    This took a while to read, but if you commit, you’ll get really into it like I did. Simply marvelous!

  • Bill on May 11, 2009

    I have never read a story like this. Is it based off of that kid who killed his father and his father’s friend? Oh well, it’s one tof the best stories I’ve ever read.

  • Mini-McCleney on May 14, 2009

    I love chicken nuggets… but this is good too.
    Do you think pregnant ladies are sexy? I do. It’s too bad that mom died, especially if she was pregnant when she died…
    I have to go get a towel for my peerspiration issues.
    I’M SWEATING UP A STORM!

  • John L. on Jun 8, 2009

    WOW! What a bad little boy! I read your poem “An Ode to Friendship” and they are both so great. I would print this out and give it to my friends like I did with your poem, but I don’t think I have enough paper. Well, continue your career in writing and you would be a great author!
    -John

  • davchild on Sep 24, 2009

    Talk about suspenseful! This is amazing.

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