A women with a dilemma.

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She knew she shouldn’t have worn it. But she needed to see if she could dance in it. Well, she certainly had her answer. But the question now was what to do?

Her instructor called her attention back to the task at hand, the international rumba routine for the show. She had lots of dips and sexy poses with new arm styling. How was she going to manage with this stupid strapless bra hanging just under her breasts? She looked like a cow with her udder exposed. Strange no one seemed to notice her dilemma.

“Just a sec”, she said as she turned away from the wall of mirrors.

Quick as a flash she thrust her hands under the folds of her magenta tunic with the crocheted straps, and pulled the offending bra down. She stepped out of it, and tossed it on the nearest table then raced back to her instructor.

She missed the shocked look of the new female instructor teaching on the other side of the studio. Her instructor, a seasoned pro, only smiled while they both tried to ignore her husband’s jaw, which had dropped to the floor.

“Okay,” she said, “Shall we take it from the top?”

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  • yeasin on Jun 11, 2011

    nice post

  • Investinmenetwork on Jun 11, 2011

    Well researched and informative,

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  • Lord Banks on Jun 12, 2011

    Different! was she topless or just not wearing a bra as she took it off? Good work. LB

  • martie on Jun 12, 2011

    Loved the image. Why is it we women seem to have trouble with bra’s and panty hose. They either ride up or down but, simply don’t want to stay in place.

  • Goodselfme on Jun 12, 2011

    Ha, Let’s take it from the top is a great line for this entire read. WEll done.

  • Ukrainian on Jun 12, 2011

    Interesting story.

  • 1hopefulman on Jun 12, 2011

    So the strapless bra isn’t that practical?

  • Tulan on Jun 12, 2011

    Quiet a picture, Pam, I could well imagine the scene.

  • Guy Hogan on Jun 12, 2011

    If I understand what happened, she took the strapless bra off just leaving the crocheted top. That would be so sexy, giving hints and peeks of nudity without her actually being topless. Beautiful. Letting the reader know everyone’s reaction: the shocked female instructor, the stuned husband and her partner, the pro who has seen it all and only smiles, is a lovely touch. While our heroine is full of…chaputz. I hope I spelled it right and I hope you know what it means. This is an excellent example of show don’t tell flash fiction. It is so good that as editor/publisher of The Female Nude And The Art Of Flash Fiction–I just recently changed the name of my blog–I would like to offer you publication in the most dynamic flash fiction online magazine on the Internet. Send me a message and let me know your answer.–Guy

  • fishfry aka Elizabeth Figueroa on Jun 13, 2011

    Excellent piece! While some can get away from just taking off the bra all together, others should think again about wearing a strapless to start with. I like the description she state about the other female, her husband and how she just went on normally, starting from the top.

  • papaleng on Jun 13, 2011

    lovely story, Pam. My wife hates strapless bras.

  • CA Johnson on Jun 13, 2011

    What a great story! She made quite an impression in class. Thanks so much for sharing.

  • plumaatpapel on Jun 13, 2011

    I like your story, can relate to it

  • Jackie on Jun 14, 2011

    Oh, Pam, what a situation. I believe I’d have sit this one out. Publish in a Dance Magazine as a Learning Experience.

  • Moses Ingram on Jun 16, 2011

    Excellent post.

  • Ruby Hawk on Jun 17, 2011

    Now that sounds frightening. She did find the right solution. A pleasant short story.

  • Bo Russo on Jun 18, 2011

    The less bras in this world the better, period!

  • Likha on Jun 22, 2011

    I don\’t use strapless bras. They can put ladies in an embarrassing situation.

  • Melody SJAL on Jun 25, 2011

    I am not comfortable wearing a strapless bra too…

  • nobert soloria bermosa on Jun 28, 2011

    beautifully expressed story…

  • erwinkennythomas on Aug 29, 2011

    an interesting dilemma! well written!

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