This is a flash fiction story about culture, sexuality and male-female relationships.

She moved and strutted accenting the roll of her hips.  The men watched.  Eugene watched her and he watched the men, too.  Most of the men simply stared and drank their beers.  During the song a man got up and approached the dance floor.  Cindy was on the dance pole upside down, her hands free and her arms held wide with her legs locked around the pole.  When she saw the man and the dollar bill in his hand she slid down the pole until the palms of her hands touched the floor and then she unlocked her legs and came down to stand upright.  She strutted over and sat in front of the man.  She opened and closed her legs several times while smiling at the man.  He reached and put the dollar bill in her G-string.  He went back to his table to sit alone.

A man sitting at a table near the dance floor balled up a dollar bill and threw it onto the dance floor.  Three other balled up dollar bills were already on the dance floor.  Cindy was on her hands and knees, her body undulating like a snake.  Now the music was full of a woman’s sexual moans and groans.

Eugene chugged down the rest of his beer, got up and walked to the exit.  He turned to watch Cindy undulating.  After a moment he walked back and up to the raised dance floor.  When Cindy saw him coming she crawled to the very edge of the dance floor.  She sat up high on her knees.  He stood in front of her.  The woman’s sexual moans and groans on the sound track were desperate.   Cindy shimmied her shoulders making her breasts bounce.  Eugene looked in Cindy’s eyes.  He looked at her breasts.  He looked in her eyes.  He looked at the nipples of her breasts.  She cupped her breasts in her hands and squeezed them several times.

Eugene reached into his back pocket, took a ten dollar bill from his wallet and placed it in her G-string.  Then he turned and walked out of her life.

Girls Gone Wild

The End

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  • Carolyn Cordon on Nov 12, 2010

    This is a good story – the ending could have gone either way and the author kept it nicely balanced. Well done.

  • LoveDoctor on Feb 22, 2011

    I like the ending.

  • Roe2115 on Mar 22, 2011

    Red platform shoes and a black G-string. Great detail.

  • sandhee on Apr 26, 2011

    no comment just nice story..

  • Christine Ramsay on May 16, 2011

    I enjoyed the read, Guy. A very compelling story without going over the top. Well done.

  • PR Mace on May 16, 2011

    Quite well done and I agree it could have ended in many different ways. I like the ending you wrote.

  • Tulan on May 16, 2011

    A good read Guy, I’m sure it will be published.

  • sathi.k on May 20, 2011

    Enjoyable reading. Eugene did the right thing. I love this story. Is there a part ll coming up?

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