This is a short confusing story that I have Just made up.

I was playing outside with my friends. It was a beautiful Saturday afternoon.

“Matt come inside and have some lunch” My mother said

I ran inside and ate. When I was done she told me to get ready to go.

“Where are we going?” I said

“You are going to Mexico with your friends” she said

I went to my bedroom and packed my bags. Went outside and there was a bus. Me and my three friends got onto the bus and we were on our way. The bus drove for hours, it had finally stopped. We were trying to take a short cut and got stuck in this town. We all got out to see if there was any one in this town that had gas or could help us.

“Guys lets split up and check all the houses” I said

There were only five houses and we had 5 people. I walked into the big plantation house. I rang the door bell and no one came to the door. But I had heard rustling inside the house. The windows were boarded up so I couldn’t look in. I opened the door and walked in. I checked every room except the basement and so far haven’t found anything. I walk into the basement and it is pitch black and I have no light. I decided to turn around and go check in with all of my other friends. I walked out of the house and I see that the bus is gone. I ran over to the post office and none of my friends were there. So then I ran to the grocery store, the slaughter house, and the hotel and none of my friends were there. At this point I am very scared and the only place I hadn’t looked was the hospital. I walked in and it was full of people working. I thought this was very weird so I asked the person at the front desk if my friends had come in yet.

“No, we havn’t had a patient in years” She said

I ran back outside, tripped on a rock and hit my head on a rock. I blacked out and woke up in my room back home. I jumped out of my bed and looked for my parents. I couldn’t find them anywhere. I went outside and and found my friends.

“Hey guys where are my parents?” I said

“Matt you left with them yesterday” My friend said

THE END

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  • aroosamorose on Aug 21, 2011

    Nice post.Keep up a good work.

  • bolive on Aug 21, 2011

    great share! keep writing my friend!

  • erwinkennythomas on Aug 21, 2011

    v. good story! a rather surprising end!

  • Valerie Hamer on Aug 21, 2011

    I got really involved in that, well done.

  • vickylass on Aug 21, 2011

    Really a good, thrilling one. Keep up the good writing.

  • KittyK on Aug 24, 2011

    Great story about a town….good job!

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