This is a story set one hundred and ten trillion years after the Big Bang. A peek into the distant future. Some deliberate echoes of The Time Machine by H.G. Wells.

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The giant red globe of the sun hung over young Omega’s head. That great orb filled nearly a quarter of the sky. Omega found it hard to believe that the sun was a “red dwarf star”. Yet who was he to argue with his elders?

A chill wind blew along the desolate beach. In the distance, some giant crabs were on patrol, looking for a meal. Above the crabs, some rowdy gulls were waiting to scavenge anything the crabs might leave.

Not much to report here. The usual dismal scene. Nothing here to reflect the importance of these moments. Omega had seen moving pictures of other planets, on which they had things called “days”. This particular “Earth” here was “tidally locked” so that the same side faced the sun at all times. The sun was always there, solidly positioned above Omega’s head.  Here on the equator, they “enjoyed” maximum warmth: yet it was not too much above the freezing point of water!

Mother appeared.

Mother: “We will be ready to start in ten Lunons, Omega. I will call you then.”

Omega nodded. He gulped, nervously and mentally reviewed why this ritual was necessary. What had the elders said?

Oh yes. The Universe began 110 trillion standard years ago with the “Big Bang”. It had expanded at an incredible rate. In those early days the universe had teemed with stars like the sun. Most of those stars had travelled together in great wheels and clouds called “galaxies”. Those galaxies had been full of light and heat, and life!

Yet all that abundance had been before the “Degenerate Era”, when the universe had thinned out so much that no new stars were formed. The remaining stars had died and died. So now the sun above Omega was the last known star.

They were about to enter the “Black Hole Era”, when the universe would be dominated by Black Holes of course. After that would be the “Dark Era”. Finally, about 500 trillion years after the Big Bang, the universe would undergo “Heat Death”. Well, that was what Omega recalled from his lessons.

What was bothering The Elders was the state of the sun. It was foundering. Soon it would just blink into darkness. Before then, the world would just get colder. A bleak prospect.

Mum reappeared. She ushered Omega to “The Circle”. The children were joining with the adults and Elders now. That central obelisk, encircled by the populace, was brightly lit. They all formed an unbroken chain.

Omega felt a great glowing from within. It was happening! Warmer and warmer. Brighter and brighter. All of them shone and flowed and coalesced. Then they each broke free and flew apart!

It was done! Every one of them had transformed into a spirit energy being! Each was now a shining orb. So alive, and free from what would have been a slow freezing death under the last dying sun.

Such joy. Eternal life achieved at last. None of them had heard of our Earth. None of them was human. There were similarities with us, but they were quite alien. Who cares. They were sentient beings who had escaped the death of the last star, and ultimately the universe.

Paul Butters

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  • Elise Marie on Oct 1, 2011

    Love IT! Awesome little story! :D

    Soleil

  • PaulB on Oct 1, 2011

    Thanks Soleil. Enjoyed writing this too. In spite of family distractions I really got into the zone.

  • DHEERUMT on Oct 1, 2011

    good story

  • sunshineleo05 on Oct 1, 2011

    Fantastic read! It sounds like the beginning of a book…is there more to this story? I would love a sequel to this post. ;)

  • dazzlejazz on Oct 1, 2011

    You managed to really pull us in to that world in so few words – that’s a talent!

    Loved it! And sounds like a really nice way to go too.

  • PaulB on Oct 2, 2011

    Thanks All.

    dazzle – gladly they have NOT gone. They have moved to a higher plane.

    sunshine – That is a challenge! How to follow on from the end of the stellar universe. MMM

  • LewSethics on Oct 2, 2011

    I don’t read much on triond anymore, but I’m a sucker for futuristic fiction.
    This can’t be the end of the story? Surely you could pen another paragraph or two to describe the next five hundred trillion years, haha.

  • PaulB on Oct 2, 2011

    Any more requests? Or story-lines about black holes and heat-death?

  • Socorro Lawas on Oct 4, 2011

    You’re a fine narrator.

  • farawaysis on Oct 5, 2011

    Thanks for sharing your well-written story.

  • Larinna Chandler on Oct 10, 2011

    Wow! I am with farawaysis on this one! Excellent. I loved how it was so simple, but yet complex at the same time..if that makes any sense at all. The emotion of Omega is great. The moment he ‘gulps’ you want to gulp along with him. Whats going to happen? NIce!!

  • Boyka on Oct 13, 2011

    nice .. I Like It

  • RS Wing on Oct 16, 2011

    Pretty damned good, Paul. This reads like a great intro to something much bigger if you choose to do so. great imagery and written quite well. you’re a cool storyteller. Keep them coming.

    Peace

  • Afrohead1408 on Nov 1, 2011

    Very good

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