30 Years ago, when I was very young, I got fed up with society and dropped out for a while. The place I chose to camp out for four months, was an empty house in a place called “The Downs” up in the mountains near Tzaneen, a town in the Limpopo Province of South Africa. This is part of the Drakensberg Mountain Range and was called Die Wolkberg (The Cloud Mountain).

This place is the true backdrop to some of my stories.

The title of this essay I stole from a book by Harry Klein, describing his journey in this same valley.

The valley of mists

 30 years ago, when I was very young, I got fed up with society and dropped out for a while.  The place I chose to camp out for 4 months, was an empty house in a place called “The Downs” up in the mountains near Tzaneen, a town in the Limpopo Province of South Africa.  

 I was there half legally. My friend was a state game ranger and one of his tasks was to look after areas bought by the government for future nature conservation reserves.  He was the one who originally brought me up the mountain to show me – not knowing that I will develop an obsession to live there for a while.  He negotiated a letter from his boss which confirmed that I was allowed in the area. He also brought me a small gas stove and single bed.  That was all the furniture in the house.

 This area had a large indigenous forest and there were rare butterfly species along the rivers. Avocado orchards still flourished and one of the grandsons of the well-known Orrie Baragwanath, and his family lived a few km from me.  They had secured a contract to harvest the fruits for a few years. 

 Even now, 30 years later, I can’t recall being in a place more beautiful than this.  The house I lived in (Haffenden Heights) had the mountain range to its back, bringing on evening quite early.  My water supply came from a small reservoir, which was fed directly from a stream in the mountain – open a tap in the house, and you got water from the mountain stream . . .  I had to heat water outside in a steel drum to make bath water.  The faint sweet scent of jasmine was brought on the evening breeze, from one of the empty farm houses close by. 

 My staple food was maize, rice and avocado.  A lane of huge pecan nut trees hugged the footpath to the pool and waterfall I frequented daily.  Some of the empty farmyards had a few fruit trees, and for a few weeks I had mulberries and oranges.  A few weeks into my stay I had more frequent contact with the Baragwanaths, although many days went by without me speaking a word to anyone.  A young boy who lived in the mountains visited infrequently and we had a relationship of mutual benefit:  I taught him English and he would bring me whatever took his fancy:  goats’ milk and wood was the two resources I appreciated most. It was not so easy for a young city girl to cut those large black wattle branches into smaller pieces of wood to fit into my fireplace or water drum.  His name was really Magic, as in my story of The Magic Boy. Magic’s family brought me 4 hens and a large rooster, supplementing my protein intake.  From my side I brought them maize, rice, tea, and sugar.

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  • Lerinti Sorin on Mar 15, 2011

    verry nice this post. Have you had difficulties in life.

  • elnavann on Mar 15, 2011

    No, I was just a bit rebellious

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  • youthinksokiddo on Mar 15, 2011

    sounds like a worthwhile experience. travels are often significant because they make us see our home in a new light.

  • lowellhenderson on Mar 15, 2011

    It is a lovely story and and I am jealous of not doing something like it myself.

  • fatima27 on Mar 15, 2011

    it’s a very nice piece, love it so much.

  • aprilsong on Mar 15, 2011

    nice story.

  • Jay Banzon on Mar 15, 2011

    good story

  • Martin Kloess on Mar 16, 2011

    good article

  • kirti on Mar 16, 2011

    Nice one but why I found it touchy too.

  • pippe vonkuhne on Mar 16, 2011

    The view from Mount Olympus is breathtaking but can leave us isolated, and I remember a Carole King song from the seventies: “There is no easy way down.” Thank you elnavann for sharing with us a very informative and moving story.

  • Shannow on Mar 16, 2011

    Very nice :-)

  • CHIPMUNK on Mar 16, 2011

    It is good to share what you have on your mind

  • anndavey650 on Mar 16, 2011

    I had a treble recorder lol… and I didn’t play it very well either. Sounds like a nice life though… so different from noisy old England.

  • elnavann on Mar 16, 2011

    @anndavey650. Remember this was really “life in transit” – but it was special . . .

  • d1dezire on Mar 16, 2011

    Is that picture the place? If it is then it must have been really beautiful. Having to rough it out for a while would also have helped you better appreciate some things when you returned back to the city.

  • Noisy Cricket on Mar 16, 2011

    This is an amazing recollection of rebellion and youth. I love it. Thanks for sharing.

  • Pearl Wilson on Mar 17, 2011

    a heavenly experience. youth is enviable.

  • DR.VNS on Mar 17, 2011

    That was interesting.

  • Starpisces on Mar 17, 2011

    very interesting, you were so adventurous.

  • Mark Modi on Mar 17, 2011

    There are always a time when we want to get away from society. I once also feel like that even though I’m not that rebellious. But just want some piece of my mind.

  • papaleng on Mar 18, 2011

    good piece.

  • Erin Miller on Mar 18, 2011

    Yeah you can get your triond account copyrighted on the site. Also for double ensured protection have it confirmed by a lawyer this way no one on triond or anywhere else can steal your work.

  • Ruby Hawk on Mar 18, 2011

    What an amazing adventure, I envy you.

  • RS Wing on Mar 19, 2011

    Great narrative and awesome journey. Great setting for writing, nothing but desolation…

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