Good descriptions I could picture this story in my minds eye.
Writing flowed along nicely ,easy to follow.
Dena on Jun 1, 2009
This is a really strong storyline with great attention to detail. I could imagine myself sitting right alongside the storyteller as he observed the woman below. The content is well-developed and flows smoothly. I enjoyed reading it.
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