The kids are in trouble when they wake in an underground lab. Who behind the abduction?

Denny and Jenny had come off the dance floor completely exhausted. “Let’s get something to drink!” Denny called out amongst all the noise.

“Okay,” Jenny said as Denny led her over to the bar.

Denny ordered two drinks and sat on the stool next to Jenny’s. She was still in disguise. She hated showing her true self in public. Denny looked over at her and smiled.

“Aren’t you glad you came out tonight?” Denny asked her.

“I guess so, but I wonder where everyone else is?” Jenny asked, looking around.

“I don’t know,” Denny said, taking her hand. “And I don’t care.” He pulled her closer to him and pressed his lips against hers.

“Denny, stop it,” Jenny said after pulling away. “People are watching.”

“So what,” he said. “Let them watch.” He kissed her again, but this time she didn’t pull away. “You see. That wasn’t so bad.”

Jenny smiled and picked up her drink and took a sip. Suddenly, she looked worried. “They really have been gone a long time. I hope nothing’s happened to them.”

“Stop worrying,” Denny said. “What could happen?”

“To us?” Jenny said, looking sternly at him. “Anything… and none of it good.”

“So this means we have to go look for them.” She nodded. She had a way of getting Denny to do whatever she wanted. They walked hand in hand looking all around and trying to assess where their friends might have gone. An eerie feeling came over Jenny as she reached the back hallway. As they entered she started to shake.

“Hey, Jen, are you alright?” Denny asked.

“Yeah,” she said as she looked around.

“Hey, you kids,” she heard a man’s voice from behind. “Jenny jumped out of fright and faded out for a moment. Denny was ready to attack until he saw who it was.

“Mister Logan?” he shouted.

“Not so loud,” Mike said. “Someone could be listening.”

“What the hell is going on?” Denny whispered intensely.

“I could ask you the same thing. I told MJ to keep you all away from here.”

“Something’s really wrong, isn’t it?” Jenny said, frantically looking around for clues. “First. Cree takes off. Now, Everyone else is gone too.”

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  • webseowriters on Nov 10, 2010

    Thanks for sharing a nice stuff

  • Joanna Maharis on Nov 10, 2010

    I like the way you build suspense in this piece. It’s getting really exciting. So exciting that this piece is pulsating. Some great work here.

  • albert1jemi on Nov 10, 2010

    good one

  • Rehoboth on Nov 11, 2010

    $nicepost$

  • jad farid on Nov 1, 2011

    thanks for sharing :)

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