The elevator breaks and all the people on it are died.

There is more room for another one

Susan is on her visiting to her friend. Now she is sitting in the sofa of her hotel room. She is half sleeping. And suddenly she hears some noise

coming from outside. So she goes to the window to have a see. Well, into her eyes is a scary scene: an old ugly man is driving a hearse, and the scarier thing is on the hearse are many living souls. Well, she can’t tell it is dream or reality. And what she wants now is to go to bed and put the quilt on her head. But you know what? The ugly old man shouts at her: hi, there is more room for another one. Well, I think you can imagine how Susan is now.

The next day, Susan wants to check out of the hotel immediately. So she needs take the elevator first. When the door the elevator opens, she sees the same old man there, who is in charge of the elevator. Lots of people want to take the elevator quickly, and at this time, Susan hears the same words last night: hi, there is more room for another one. Of course, Susan runs away as if she runs away from hell. Then there comes a piece of news, the elevator breaks and all the people on it are died.

 

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