I wrote this long ago as part of a story idea, and condensed it to this length. If you want to read a thriller, why not make it brief.

I am Jon, in love with Debbie. Debbie is murdered. Sherry is there to comfort me, time of great sorrow and grieving. Time passes, healing. Begin working with Sherry, date, break up, still friends, then suicide, leaves note. Could not bear to live knowing I don’t love her. Sherry was there to comfort me. I blame myself. Another time of sorrow and grieving. Will it ever end? Something is not right! Debbie murdered? Sherry’s suicide? Who is responsible? Don’t find out. Meet April. Courtship, fear, falling in love again. Nightmares about April being murdered. April is attacked, but survives. In the end, Sherry reappears. She murdered Debbie and attempted to kill April. I end Sherry’s pain and mine. May she rest in peace.

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