Together Forever

Ophelia Crane on Feb 25, 2008

Tags: death, romance, zombies

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All Rose wants is to die when her boyfriend Ronnie passes away. she just might get her wish.

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J Lofton on May 19, 2008
This story’s description of death, suicide, and Love is so detailed and complete. The avoidance of truth, the thoughts of lost love. Very interesting. Well told.
C. Bridges on May 20, 2008
This was a story filled with life experiences that were very detailed. Well written and reading it was pleasureful.
J. A. Martin on Sep 4, 2008
I truly enjoyed the fact that the author provided a detailed description of Rose & Ronnie\’s love. From the moment of Ronnie\’s passing I was able to understand her pain.

I also found the use of the word \”Passing\” as opposed to Murder interesting. The word \”Passing\” kept the reader from feeling anger and revenge, it kept me focused totally on the \”Lost\”.

Great Job!!!!

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