Comments on: Together Forever http://authspot.com/short-stories/together-forever/ Mon, 22 Mar 2010 07:11:55 -0400 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.4 hourly 1 By: J. A. Martin http://authspot.com/short-stories/together-forever/comment-page-1/#comment-469565 J. A. Martin Thu, 04 Sep 2008 13:37:02 +0000 http://authspot.com/short-stories/together-forever/#comment-469565 I truly enjoyed the fact that the author provided a detailed description of Rose & Ronnie\'s love. From the moment of Ronnie\'s passing I was able to understand her pain. <br /> <br /> I also found the use of the word \"Passing\" as opposed to Murder interesting. The word \"Passing\" kept the reader from feeling anger and revenge, it kept me focused totally on the \"Lost\".<br /> <br /> Great Job!!!! I truly enjoyed the fact that the author provided a detailed description of Rose & Ronnie\’s love. From the moment of Ronnie\’s passing I was able to understand her pain.

I also found the use of the word \”Passing\” as opposed to Murder interesting. The word \”Passing\” kept the reader from feeling anger and revenge, it kept me focused totally on the \”Lost\”.

Great Job!!!!

]]> By: C. Bridges http://authspot.com/short-stories/together-forever/comment-page-1/#comment-469563 C. Bridges Wed, 21 May 2008 01:39:42 +0000 http://authspot.com/short-stories/together-forever/#comment-469563 This was a story filled with life experiences that were very detailed. Well written and reading it was pleasureful. This was a story filled with life experiences that were very detailed. Well written and reading it was pleasureful.

]]> By: J Lofton http://authspot.com/short-stories/together-forever/comment-page-1/#comment-469561 J Lofton Tue, 20 May 2008 04:17:23 +0000 http://authspot.com/short-stories/together-forever/#comment-469561 This story's description of death, suicide, and Love is so detailed and complete. The avoidance of truth, the thoughts of lost love. Very interesting. Well told. This story’s description of death, suicide, and Love is so detailed and complete. The avoidance of truth, the thoughts of lost love. Very interesting. Well told.

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