A simple short story idea I had when listening to death metal and watching a prison documentary.

Her last sight, last bit of “freedom” which is to breathe and say goodbye to her family. Her family has disowned her entirely, since she told them she was a lesbian, they quit believing in her. She was a mistake they could dismiss with a few papers. After they threw her out, she began to get the black outs. The blackouts where she knew they were going to happen, where she knew she would wake up in even more trouble. She had only been shocked of her actions during these black outs the first three times. The ones to follow, which were many, got worse and she expected them to. She had so much pain, she could feel no anger, just emptiness where her heart should be. She was known as the Heartbreaker,and she would rip her victims hearts out literally. Her brown eyes turned black during these black outs. She had for a long time known why, and never did much to fix it. The reason for her eye color change, was the demon inside of her. She had been weak, physically, but unnaturally strong spiritually, and so this demon had chose her as a host. She let it take control when she needed it to, and then woke up taking the punishment. She was now on her last punishment. Capital punishment.

She is sitting in the chair, ready for it. Knowing this will be her last moment, she smiles. She does not know what awaits her in and after death,but as her eyes turn black she thinks, “This chair is the most comfortable chair I have ever sat in.”

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  • Adrian on Nov 23, 2008

    Hey babe. Pretty tight. I liked it- not really for writting of it. But just more the the story part. It’s..great if you ask me.

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