Tommie girl was a tomboy who only knew her father. When he died, she was afraid to marry and let someone else into her life. She started her own clothing business selling on the streets.

Tommie Girl’s Fashion Story

By Gail Nobles

Tommie girl is a new cartoon character that I added to my website at www.littlebennysite.com. She is a tomboy who wants to have children someday. Tommie only knew her father. She learned a lot from him. When he died, Tommie was very lonely. Her father was the only man that she ever trusted. Tommie was afraid to marry and let someone else into her life. She started her own clothing business selling on the streets. Tommie named her business Tommie Gee’s.

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There is something special about the hood that she wears. It is interchangeable. Tommie can change it into a cloak to hide children close to her from evil. She is undercover and can hide her face with her hood. Tommie can button the hood over the lower part of her face.

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Tommie girl met an evil business man named Cigar who sold cigars. He is like a dream man that likes to make the young folks believe that he can give them heaven on earth. Cigar helped Tommie get a real business started, and he got part of the money. Tommie felt that she owed Cigar a lot for helping her, and she found out later that he was committing a crime. She hated what Cigar was doing to the little children of all ages. He led them to crime so they could work for him. Cigar turned them into drug dealers, street gangs, muggers, killers, and any other kind of criminal that he could make them become. This brought a little conflict between him and Tommie girl. She did not argue much with Cigar, but she secretly worked against him. Tommie girl was sad that she got her business started with Cigar. Sometimes a plan may seem perfect, but what about the price? Tommie girl began to worry about her life. She felt that she was in danger along with the children.

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  • Lucy Lockett on May 12, 2007

    Great story,all the elements of intrigue.

  • Gail Nobles on May 14, 2007

    Thanks! I didn’t think anyone liked this one.

  • Lisa on May 28, 2007

    You made Tommie Girl beautiful in part 2. Here, she looks like a real Tom boy. You changed her in part 2 to good fashion.

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