A holiday just to get away.

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  • cutedrishti8 on Nov 2, 2009

    Nice one to read

  • LOVELYHONEY on Nov 2, 2009

    lovely i am too from canada wish i we had met too

  • Christine Ramsay on Nov 3, 2009

    A great read. Well done.

    Christine

  • lillyrose on Nov 4, 2009

    Awwww… very cute!

  • LOVELYHONEY on Nov 5, 2009

    u r a rich guy

    experimenting and basking

    in the warmth of your wealth

    have u ever thought of the poor peoples

    love health??

    i wonder when u will

  • XXElleXX on Nov 9, 2009

    Good story mate..although I will say this.. it took me a while to gain an overall understanding of what was going on..a couple of punctuation and grammar issues..but other than that..not a bad story Peter :-)

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