The story of six teens who go to college in the city. These teens have different stories to tell about their college life. The city changed their personalities a bit.

Protagonists:

Lilet – a small town girl goes to a big city for college

Giselle – Lilet’s bestfriend who also goes to the city for college and she is a sort of a businessminded person

Daniel – a small town boy and who acts as a leader of a group. who has compassion for arts and digital gadgets. he is a governor’s son.

Maya – a small town girl who grew up in a ranch. she has a compassion for arts and digital gadgets like Daniel.

Lucia – a small town girl who has big dreams and bestfriend of Maya.

Fredo – a small town boy and a rich kid. he is a son of a socialite and fashion designer. a confidant of Daniel

Antagonists:

Dr. Rivero – took the doctoral degree in Philosophy and Theology. Has compassion in teaching. Husband of a socialite and a chairwoman of the board of the university. he is sort of strict and disciplinarian.

Lucinda Rivero – the socialite and a chairwoman of the board of the university committee. sort of snob and an alumni of Theta sorority.

Lovely Jane – a senior student and the president of the Theta sorority and comes from a rich family. quite brat and snob.

Patricia Liberty – a senior student and bestfriend of Lovely Jane and her executive assistant

Terrence – a senior student and nephew of Dr. Rivero who have a political ambition. he is the president of Alpha Fraternity

Mrs. Clark – she is a guidance counselor who gives advices to the young people.

Dean Devitto – the dean of the university

Minor characters:

David Parker – a senior student and the president of Gamma Fraternity

Nelson – an Alpha Fraternity neophyte

Ms. Amanda Rivero – the perfect daughter of Dr. Rivero and Lucinda Rivero and personal tutor of Lilet.

Aunt of Lilet – who won the nobel prize winner in the 1970’s

Chapter One:

The story started in a Philosophy class. Dr. Rivero asked his class to write an essay about their philosophy in life. Terrence, who is a straight A student, got an A of course. His friend Lovely Jane, a cheer leader got an A also. Lovely Jane’s bestfriend Patricia Liberty also got an A. However, there are six freshmen in the class got an F. They are Daniel, Lilet, Giselle, Maya, Fredo, and Lucia. They are freshmen who came from a small town went to a big city for college. And, this is their first day.

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  • miszy819 on Jun 10, 2009

    good story line. however, you still need to hone your grammatical ability to come out with a better job. or, if you can’t do it, find someone who can edit your job for possible publication.

    keep on writing.

    siony

  • Queendom Heiress on Jun 11, 2009

    Thank you for your support. I will take note of that. Thanks. Blessings to you. =)

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