A young couple in a car experience some funny goings on.

         Lorna and Greg were driving home from a late night party. It was 12.30am and the drive home was not that long but it did take them through a few small villages. The radio was playing some old 40ties music and Lorna tapped her foot along to the rhythm as her eyes closed and her head relaxed back against the headrest. As her foot tapped her skirt chose to ride up her slender sun browned legs. Greg caught a glimpse and knew then he was not going to drop her straight home to her parent’s house.

         Indicating he pulled right into a field gateway and turned off the engine.

         “What do you think you are doing?” asked Lorna with a slight smirk on her face.

         “Now don’t come the innocent, you know exactly what I am GOING! To be doing.” Sure enough Lorna did know. They often stopped off on the way home; both of them lived with their parents, so they never had anywhere else to go when they wanted sex.

         Greg undid his seat belt and when Lorna had slipped out of hers he began kissing her on the lips, tender, light butterfly kisses, that he knew drove her wild. She was making all the appropriate noises that encouraged him to move on a little further. Sliding his hand up under her skirt until her found the warmness of her panties. He held his hand there for a while letting his excitement rise.

         “Do you want to climb into the back seat hun?” he asked as he slipped his hand back out from under her skirt.

         “Mmmmm sure I do.” Lorna turned round and knelt on the passenger seat placing her body so she could easily slip between the front seats and into the back.

         As she lay down and patiently waited for Greg to climb into the back she looked out of the window and up into the sky at the stars, there weren’t many just the odd one dottered here and there. They looked so still and peaceful. She was starting to feel a little sleepy. The excitement of the previous moments seemed to be slipping her by. Greg joined her where she lay and lazily ran the tips of his fingers up her T-shirt covered tummy.

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  • ken bultman on Sep 14, 2009

    Fun read. Wake up, Little Suzie.

  • Marie Milton on Sep 14, 2009

    I’m sure they wouldn’t mind that happening everytime they awoke after they made love : ))
    The ever lasting car of love-making ; ))

    A great story and it sure would be weird if it ever happened : ))

  • cardy on Sep 14, 2009

    Fab story really good read!!

  • Lostash on Sep 14, 2009

    Brilliant piece! A nice sci-fi twisted with the erotic!

  • BullwinkleMuse on Sep 18, 2009

    Wow…I’ve felt the Earth move a few times in my day, but have never drawn an extra-terrestrial crowd before! Good stuff.

  • Nisa West on Sep 18, 2009

    Time and Space- what a mystery! This reminded me of when I was driving and suddenly I was 4 hours ahead of where I was only 15 minutes prior. I thought perhaps giants had picked me up in my car and placed me further along my journey. :)

    Yours is a very cool story.

  • XXElleXX on Mar 24, 2010

    Gawd blimin’ heck…hehehe…at least Lorna’s parents won’t be mad ~ an eye-popping story about an encounter with UFO ships from outer space :-)

  • TwiKnight on Jul 16, 2010

    Probably hallucinating. Though, should anyone be allowed to hallucinate, seriously, aliens? Cows in leotards, now that’s something you don’t see every day. Great write, mate! Truly as intense as the things I’m hearing inside my head right now, which I believe are the sounds of two naive teenagers making love in the middle of the day. I’m not kidding. :P

  • Phoenix Montoya on May 4, 2011

    Lovely write, Lisa. I’ve enjoyed the read.

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