This short story is about two friends in 2009 talking about the war for the first time. They sit at an outdoor cafe drinking glasses of beer on a warm sunny day in Pittsburgh.

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“I don’t remember much.  I served in a 105mm howitzer section with the 1st Cav Airmobile between 1965-1966.  I saw plenty of action; but my artillery company was lucky.  If I remember correctly, we only lost three guys.  One night I was wandering around the area and almost got my head blown off when I walked past the muzzle of another unit’s 105 just as it fired.  Then there was the day I reached down into the tall grass to pick up something and it turned out to be a bamboo viper.  If the snake had bit me I would have been dead within two minutes.  There was no antidote for the venom.  There was one week I took R & R in-country and spent the week drunk with the daughter of a family after paying the parents some money.  What do you remember about the war?”

“Let’s not talk anymore about the war.”

“Don’t remember much?”

“That’s just it.  I remember plenty.”

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  • Katien on Jun 7, 2009

    That’s good, the last line says it all.

  • Longo05 on Jul 2, 2009

    There is something deeply regrettable about this story. I think Tim O’Brien would say it’s the inherent truthfulness of the war story, and I think he would like it, mostly cause it makes you shameful to hear it.

    Anyways, I was just blog stumbling around and liked the story. Good work.
    Bryan
    soupknife/wp/com

  • Guy Hogan on Jul 4, 2009

    Thank you, Longo05, for stopping by.

    Even from a distance of many years the war does not get any better.

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