Comments on: When It Has Become Her http://authspot.com/short-stories/when-it-has-become-her/ Sun, 22 Nov 2009 06:42:10 -0500 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.4 hourly 1 By: nandita http://authspot.com/short-stories/when-it-has-become-her/comment-page-1/#comment-459817 nandita Tue, 22 Apr 2008 09:38:39 +0000 http://authspot.com/short-stories/when-it-has-become-her/#comment-459817 i can empathise with the author because it looks like she's narrating a personal ordeal without actually naming it...<br /> <br /> i hope she finds the strength to fight her inner demons.. that are weakening her mind and body... God Bless you Lalita! May you find peace... i can empathise with the author because it looks like she’s narrating a personal ordeal without actually naming it…

i hope she finds the strength to fight her inner demons.. that are weakening her mind and body… God Bless you Lalita! May you find peace…

]]> By: Chachu http://authspot.com/short-stories/when-it-has-become-her/comment-page-1/#comment-459815 Chachu Wed, 19 Dec 2007 19:27:37 +0000 http://authspot.com/short-stories/when-it-has-become-her/#comment-459815 Intresting read i agree... May god bless her!! Intresting read i agree… May god bless her!!

]]> By: Bobbi http://authspot.com/short-stories/when-it-has-become-her/comment-page-1/#comment-459813 Bobbi Sat, 15 Dec 2007 18:19:31 +0000 http://authspot.com/short-stories/when-it-has-become-her/#comment-459813 The author did not bring the meaning into clear view at the end. It could have been about a number of things. It looks like she is writing about herself and her own pain. <br /> <br /> It was like a horror story with out an ending... It made me want to pray for deliverance over the woman. It sounds like an actual demon is causing her pain. I am a Christian and I know they are real and cause real pain and problems in our lives. We can, without realizing what we are doing, give them the authority to take these actions. If it is real, I would find a good church that handles deliverances. It can make a great difference in a persons life.<br /> <br /> As far as the structure: I felt that certain words were used too many times. The author did not bring the meaning into clear view at the end. It could have been about a number of things. It looks like she is writing about herself and her own pain.

It was like a horror story with out an ending… It made me want to pray for deliverance over the woman. It sounds like an actual demon is causing her pain. I am a Christian and I know they are real and cause real pain and problems in our lives. We can, without realizing what we are doing, give them the authority to take these actions. If it is real, I would find a good church that handles deliverances. It can make a great difference in a persons life.

As far as the structure: I felt that certain words were used too many times.

]]> By: Anne Lyken-Garner http://authspot.com/short-stories/when-it-has-become-her/comment-page-1/#comment-459811 Anne Lyken-Garner Sat, 15 Dec 2007 17:45:00 +0000 http://authspot.com/short-stories/when-it-has-become-her/#comment-459811 This was an interesting read! I just found the many exclamation marks a bit off-putting! It lost some of its meaning I think! But this is just my humble opinion! I have been wrong lots of times before! This was an interesting read! I just found the many exclamation marks a bit off-putting! It lost some of its meaning I think! But this is just my humble opinion! I have been wrong lots of times before!

]]> By: Adam http://authspot.com/short-stories/when-it-has-become-her/comment-page-1/#comment-459809 Adam Fri, 14 Dec 2007 17:53:46 +0000 http://authspot.com/short-stories/when-it-has-become-her/#comment-459809 I think it's about a woman and her period. I think it’s about a woman and her period.

]]> By: athreya http://authspot.com/short-stories/when-it-has-become-her/comment-page-1/#comment-459807 athreya Fri, 14 Dec 2007 07:32:07 +0000 http://authspot.com/short-stories/when-it-has-become-her/#comment-459807 lets pray the god to give her strength and confidence to face the problem whenever it occurs lets pray the god to give her strength and confidence to face the problem whenever it occurs

]]> By: 13xmemories http://authspot.com/short-stories/when-it-has-become-her/comment-page-1/#comment-459805 13xmemories Thu, 13 Dec 2007 05:45:44 +0000 http://authspot.com/short-stories/when-it-has-become-her/#comment-459805 well i don't know if this is a true story, but the way i see it. it has deep iner meanings.it could resemble pain in it's self.many peple don't think it can get that bad.<br /> <br /> or it can just be a peom about demons. which would just go to prove that im crazy. well i don’t know if this is a true story, but the way i see it. it has deep iner meanings.it could resemble pain in it’s self.many peple don’t think it can get that bad.

or it can just be a peom about demons. which would just go to prove that im crazy.

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