Who is screaming and why?

This is an excerpt from the novel fiction story I am working hard to create and finalize. At this point in the book our main character here, Missil, does not yet know of the hardships to come. To give a little background/story – this is a fiction writing. The book picks up from there into a wonderous new world, If you enjoy this small excerpt.. please e-mail me or comment me on this site somehow wungta@gmail.com

(This writing takes place in the beginning chapters of the book, you will know about who the character is at this point and soon after find what he ultimately seeks)

P.S. I know the tense is messy, This segment is still to be finalized any help or comments would be appreciated.

A short writing piece.

Ever since I was young, before hitting double-digits, my family would go to a condo we bought many years ago almost every summer vacation. It was at a place I referred to as "the beach", but it was really a place called Rehoboth Beach in Delaware. Before my memory fades, I wish to share my travels and the fun things I’ve had when time felt like it lasted forever.

My childhood beach in the dead of February…

Sometimes you just have to get away and you can’t…

There’s something about tonight.

A description of a fun filled day with my daughter, we usually fight so much, that we never go anyplace fun; or have anything in common!

About your new beginning.