Possible or Impossible!?

Please let me know what you think.

Jamie and a group of friends are playing one day when terrifying monsters begin to appear slaughtering anything in their path. Can they escape or will they fall victim to these strange and ferocious beings? – A story I wrote for my citizenship gcse coursework to campaign against animal cruelty and seal clubbing.

A Short story I wrote for my english coursework, it is loosely based on the video game assassins creed.

This is a letter I wrote to my spanish pen pal it was submitted for my GCSE. Please do not copy use it as a guide! thanks x.