This is the first couple of paragraphs to a story have completed I want to know what people think before I send it away for publishing. so leave a comment telling me what you think.

The Tale Of Dagger City.

Migus is bored and lets foolishness take over.

Strangle Hold, is a poem that I wrote almost two years ago. I was in a horrible relationship.

Part two of the story Roses and Thorns, starring Briar.

If the woman in your life is this house is proud, be afraid.

They lie on the pavement, full of open wounds…

There are times when I try to pull away, but it seems like you know my weakness…

A spurt on Evil Angels.

It made my heart bleed from the dagger you’ve planted…