My writings. Feedback?

Sometimes music is the key.

Fun fact: My first memory ever was this odd nightmare/dream.

The legend of Sanzuwu is that of ten sun ravens who took turns flying around the world until one day they all (blinded) flew to the Earth on the same day and set it on fire; eventually nine of the ravens were shot down.

Still not liking this description thing, but in any event, this poem goes along with "Black Leaf", "White Monarch", "Owl, Owl", and "Dragonfly" (along with a few others I’ve yet to submit.

I wrote this one for a friend who was feeling down (and likes owls a lot)

Goes with "White Monarch", "Black Leaf", and "Owl, Owl"

Again, I’m not one for descriptions, however, this poem goes along with my most previous submission and a few other to come.

You can’t let someone go.

A variant form of haiku, using three lines and as few words as possible.