Just read it
this is my own story.

I doubt your love was ever true.

You brightened up my life.

It sounds like you have a new love.

My tears fell like rain.

Jesus’ entire life on earth, was spent in total obedience to his Heavenly Father.

I have had time to think now.

I have become the admire of girl that I see at work. I don’t know her name, but, she smiles when she sees me. I hope to talk to her one day!

This is a poem about heartbreak/break ups and the questions we ask ourselves in the aftermath.

Just my writings give some feedback?