Writings Feedback?

About taking our life into our hands and making a choice to be different.

Off of the art by my friend Cassia on Deviant Art with the same title.

A poem on happiness.

The dream of freedom and America, and what it means to reach for this!

Time together is precious.

You cannot control everything.

Some thing, every thing, no thing – our thing.

I wrote this about feeling down for so long, but love helped lift me up.