Moon.

Moon, you are slave white, flaky fate forever to go.
I, older than time, and only the world wide
Are steadfast, and not mind that, in the my country
Ant people stars.

And I would not be me to get round your face in the towel screening,
If I would not be dark forever you do not have to be shiny.
In the knee but, my lap leaving you to kiss me,
Moon, I am your queen!

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Comments (8)
  • Cyni1106 on Jul 25, 2011

    Nice, Well done, I really liked this. Thanks

  • Sebastian Onciu on Aug 5, 2011

    Very nice imagery!

  • beingwell on Aug 9, 2011

    Good one!

  • erwinkennythomas on Aug 29, 2011

    wonderful!

  • Joe Ram on Aug 30, 2011

    Great poem!

  • tenraj on Sep 12, 2011

    Interesting

  • Rosettaartist1 on Sep 14, 2011

    Lovely poem. I just read 10 of your works today and will come back tomorrow for another good read. Thanks for your comments on my articles. Much appreciated.

  • FX777222999 on Sep 17, 2011

    Great job at that and beautiful.

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