My subconscious was trying to tell me my relationship with the friends I had at the time were not good for me; as well as ,the man in my life.

Not knowing what dreams may come true
can’t believe those eyes are blinded
by the one color of blue:

Nothing for me now
but a lonely empty crowd
among people who say they care;

Dreams are different from theirs
feelings somatically shared
keep that opened mind
carry my head high

Something for me now
new friends show how;

Letting the past go that
lessons have been learned
of the teacher that taught
the trials of life came back to taunt

That learning is never complete
of dreams, loneliness, and defeat
but love of the truest forms
won’t be beat by shady storms

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  • mdegenhardt on Sep 24, 2008

    The tone is perfect in this write as it assists with conveying the mood of the author, the subject matter,. Very clear and good use of imagery as well. Love that towards the end there is a sign of hope. Very well written. Michael

  • Darla Smith on Nov 24, 2008

    I’ve recently learned that some of my friends aren’t who I thought they were.

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