Abandoned

Liane Schmidt on Oct 1, 2007

Tags: abandoned, alleyway, corner, dark, destroyed

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Left in an alleyway.

She is
Abandoned
She is
Left

Some
Are left
Behind dark
Alleyways

Some
Are destroyed
Before
They even get
The chance
To
Breathe

I was luckier
Than some
I wasn’t left
In a trashcan
A dark
Corner
In nightmares

I was left
In the strange
Care of
Authorities
I was left

By her.

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Comments (2)

Darlene McFarlane on Oct 2, 2007
How deep and dark a few words can be! Very good work, Laine.
Liane Schmidt on Oct 5, 2007
Dear Darlene,

Thank you – it means more to me than you know.

Best wishes to you, always.

Sincerely,

-Liane Schmidt.

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