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This pain is deep,

It cuts like a knife.

You made me weep,

You took my life.

I am falling apart,

Cause you said good-bye.

You broke my heart,

You made me cry.

You left me alone,

You took your love.

A heart of stone,

I pray above.

I pray to heaven,

Not to fall in love.

Never again,

Not on the wings of a dove.

Strength, it leaves,

Weakness abides.

This heart no longer believes,

It washed out with the tides.

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  • michelle on Oct 10, 2006

    beautifully said

  • Sarah Jaiyne on Feb 6, 2009

    I know how that feels. I have gone through that too many times. of course, I am too eager to fall in love and he feel the same to me. Nicely written. Writing has always helped me to grieve and move on. Time can be an enemy or friend when getting over someone.

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