Meaning

ashleycollier on May 21, 2009

What does the future hold.

I can’t control the way I’m feeling,

I try to find a hidden meaning,

but I can’t change what I am seeing

so I spend my time at home day dreaming.

I don’t understand anyone around me,

I have to question all and sundry

to figure out something I might be,

but it does not stop me feeling lonely.

Do you know how it feels to not fit in?

to be in a competition you know you can’t win?

I can’t explain, i don’t know where to begin,

but your future is bright and mine is dim.

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Comments (10)

Joe Dorish on May 21, 2009
Katie Marie on May 21, 2009
Been there, but refused to stay there. You are a powerful communicator Ashley.
Darla Smith on May 21, 2009
I’ve been in the same situation.
Will Dee on May 21, 2009
Wonderful read and message.
STEVE666 on May 21, 2009
Good verse Ash, tho maybe it’s time to start seeing the glass as half full.
Kate Smedley on May 21, 2009
I’m with Steve, nice write though.
Jo Oliver on May 21, 2009
nicely done
JLEck on May 21, 2009
We all have our ups and downs, Ashley. Your expressions are excellent.
Bullwinkle Muse on May 22, 2009
Drink in the praise and see yourself as others do, bro. You’re improving all the time.
Nathan Grace on Jun 2, 2009
nice expression I can relate. I liked your use of questions in the 3rd verse.

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