A comical look at a man.

She smiles at him with eyes of trust,
He looks at her with wanton lust.
She kisses him innocently not aware.
He kisses her back thinking this game is fair.

She offers him a glass of wine,
He accepts knowing it is almost time,
She blushingly leads him out to the pool.
He smiles, “Oh man, this is cool”.

He undresses her body with his eyes.
She looks at him unawares and sighs.
He leans over and kisses her ears, her neck.
She sweetly surrenders, thinking what the heck?

He lets his hands roam touching her naked skin.
She suddenly realizes she is going into a spin.
He removes her clothing without much to do.
She shivers, giggles, then goes goo goo.

She wonders, “now what is going on?”
He has become silent, not moving for so long.
She realizes suddenly and is quite shocked
He has gone into an alcoholic stupor his mind locked.

She giggles and pushes him to the ground.
He falls down with thumping sound.
She leaves him laying there and goes to bed.
He will definitely wake up with an aching head.

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  • Shakana on Sep 30, 2007

    Really enjoyed this .. what regrets the man must have had. ~~ impish smile ~~

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