Welcome to triond. I feel that most of your poetry is about a broken home. I can feel the pain and can relate. Take a look at some of mine. Then explore and look at others too. Poetry is like a painting, for each word paints a feeling. Some people will like it, and some will not. For you, just find to write out all of that pain out of your system. Just keep writing. Judge yourself right now. Writing is a great healer.